Tomorrow I’ll be strong

[ريمة07]

Thanks for reply

[tatote]

rima ...it s realy v,sweet words ...i like it

[ريمة07]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة tatote

rima ...it s realy v,sweet words ...i like it

Thanks my dear..sweet like you

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

wawwww What's gorgeous words !

[saya2011]

wow it's a sensitive words......i like it

[rachaa]

yeah good for u be strong so strong. pretty nice poem i really liked it.my regards

[starling]

Peace be upon you

we hope that you will be strong and powerful not tomorrow but all the time and all your life but with a respect to the others

[abdelatif025]

tomorrow you will be strong

[ريمة07]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة خلق الإسلام الحياء

wawwww What's gorgeous words !

Thank you my brother

[ღ كبريـاء أنثـى ღ]

waaaaaw ......you are amazing my dear
really i like very very much this poem
i Encourage you with all my heart
i wish you all the best
rahil

[دادا22]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ريمة07

Tomorrow I’ll be strong


If you think that I’ll be sad you are wrong



I’ll let my happiness so long


You can hear my tongue

Say and say I’ll forget your love with song


Tomorrow I’ll be strong


Because you pained my heart


Cut my soul part, part


You burnt my blood by love’s heat


Finally , I find myself without haunt


But not like this I stay ; I should your love fight


For that , I tell you from my life go out


And my name you should forget


I feel that I’m fortunate


Because I have a good heart


Song always tomorrow I’ll be strong; that’s right

very nice words and meanig ,but does not comply with algerian or arab caracter
who always says
tomorrow i'll be fat,or i'll be opulent,or married,or maybe a high responsible ,or or ..but never strong.
thanks

[BouDi9]

i was a bit amazed actually i don't like poetry about love and bla bla
besides ilike how you combined words together and rimes you're talented , keep on trying again n again

Peace

[ريمة07]

Thank you soooooooooooo much for the encouraging replies

[amine pop 4 life]

Because you pained my heart
Cut my soul part, part
What a Great poem
Keep it up