Do you remember??

[ali gourgache]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة shin hyun

Yeah i remember
that this words are so
beautiful
nice
and honest

Well Done

i like it
^.^

thanks a lot for these splendid words......and thanks for your encouragement.......Good Luck

[حكاية قلب]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ali gourgache

thanks a lot for these splendid words......and thanks for your encouragement.......Good Luck

Never MInd
it's the truth


^.^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

First I would thank you Man for these poem

I liked it too much...it's like a romantic movie

I felt my self watching a film or something like

that it's a real gift you know how to choose words

and how to depicting real images just like the reader can see them when he reads

your lines that's really fantastic work ...the best of the best

An illustration!!!

...............................Fight (A)

...............................Night (A)

...............................show (B)

...............................Grow (B)

The first part rhymes like this "AABB" it's called

the "Heroic Couplets" exactly the opened couplets why?

because when you have words rhyming in the end

of four lines two rhymes together and the second two lines

rhymles together. they are an opened couplet because

the send couplet determine the meaning.

the fifth part opf your poem rhymes "ABAB"

it's called the Heroic Quatrain which consists

of four Iambic Pentameters. it could be "ABBA"

[omo mazen]

thanks so much

[ali gourgache]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

First I would thank you Man for these poem

I liked it too much...it's like a romantic movie

I felt my self watching a film or something like

that it's a real gift you know how to choose words

and how to depicting real images just like the reader can see them when he reads

your lines that's really fantastic work ...the best of the best

An illustration!!!

...............................Fight (A)

...............................Night (A)

...............................show (B)

...............................Grow (B)

The first part rhymes like this "AABB" it's called

the "Heroic Couplets" exactly the opened couplets why?

because when you have words rhyming in the end

of four lines two rhymes together and the second two lines

rhymles together. they are an opened couplet because

the send couplet determine the meaning.

the fifth part opf your poem rhymes "ABAB"

it's called the Heroic Quatrain which consists

of four Iambic Pentameters. it could be "ABBA"

Thanks brother thanks a lot for the encouragements..............Actually i do know these things but wat i wanna say that i've written this poem from the bottom of my heart......it's really spontaneous..........Thax Again