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[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hind_dz

Wooow wooow wooow

I'm truley n honestly amazed by ur poem

u really R a great writer honestly .. i thought i was reading some rap song lyrics

keep it up

Hey, Hind how are you doing. I really liked your comments hhhhh and yes they’re seen like that. Wait for more coz there still so many, enjoy.

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amel nina

that's really the most amazing poem I've ever read


I liked the subject you dealt with, good kareem and bad one, then the good triumphs over evil at last

your words are well chosen, there's a connection between the ideas and lines



and what i adored most, is that u included my name hhhhhhh, I really appreciate it from you

honestly, I'm so proud that our favourite forum has such a talent, I'm surely convinced that you'll have a promising future, u have to keep it up that way
cuz ur the best brother

Hey, thank you for passing I really appreciate that. Good and Bad kareems are existed in my writing always and some of my next writings will include these two characters I don’t know something like telling stories, tendencies in poems. I just want to try that.
And I’m proud of you too, talents are everywhere but they’re invisible.
The thing that make me stop smiling is that Brothers and Sisters always tell me that I’ll have a promising future but in fact there will be nothing you know why?
As soon as “Khalida Tomi” and the pretending responsible for Cultural affairs is inviting Illissa, Melissa…..etc there will be nothing except “Culture from Garbage” you’ll find a big huge Grave written on it (Culture) and the funeral was held a long time ago and I’m sorry I was not in.
As soon as we’re still talking about Batata in the street there will be nothing promising.
As soon as I see grand Mamas talking on Nahar TV that they’ve nothing there will be nothing promising.
I’m not hopeless but this is a truth.

[♫ وهج الأمـل ♫]

Great job brother

I've read many of your poems but this one is completely diffrent

It's amazing

Keep writing you're great

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♫ وهج الأمـل ♫

Great job brother

I've read many of your poems but this one is completely diffrent

It's amazing

Keep writing you're great

Oh Really thank you Sis, this is different coz itself is different from previous ones.
You’re Amazing too thank you God save you.

[maymay]

May god forgive you..

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maymay

May god forgive you..

Hey Maymay thank you and welcome back.
I noticed you were عضو محضور
I wanted to make a manifestation here to make you back.

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

إبتســـــــــــام

Yeah yeah I swear
.
شكرا و كنتم أنتم كذلك

[rola.29]

i'll come back soon ,
hh, it's tooooooo long
hhh ,

[BouDi9]

good luck bro

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Thank you man

[Black_Poison]

That's what i'm talking about the alive talent that never dies
thats the fighter that i know
i'm super happy to see you are writing again
i like your poem it is all good in good
i like the idea of showing thse two contrary sides that fight inside every one of us
but i think that i missed something
cuz between the lines you are saying a lot
i'll read it again and again to get it more
Thanks for mentioning my name
and i came back to say
that i didn't run away
i was just lost inside sad life
that gets harder every day
and be sure if i had the choice
i'll surely choose to stay
this is my home this is the gate
of a dream that might find the way

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison

That's what i'm talking about the alive talent that never dies
thats the fighter that i know
i'm super happy to see you are writing again
i like your poem it is all good in good
i like the idea of showing thse two contrary sides that fight inside every one of us
but i think that i missed something
cuz between the lines you are saying a lot
i'll read it again and again to get it more
Thanks for mentioning my name
and i came back to say
that i didn't run away
i was just lost inside sad life
that gets harder every day
and be sure if i had the choice
i'll surely choose to stay
this is my home this is the gate
of a dream that might find the way

yeah thank you for passing by I appreciate that why you're absent these day actually I'm absent too but i've a reason for that coz I'm busy and I told before for the idea of mentioning your names I just like that and the idea of two karims is the thing that i'll apply for mty next poems i hope you will lie them thank you

[Black_Poison]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

yeah thank you for passing by I appreciate that why you're absent these day actually I'm absent too but i've a reason for that coz I'm busy and I told before for the idea of mentioning your names I just like that and the idea of two karims is the thing that i'll apply for mty next poems i hope you will lie them thank you

No need to say thanks man you've said every thing
you've got all my respect
may Allah help you in whatever you are busy at
i've got reasons too for being abscent these days
but it's not what you think
cuz you've never done anything to make me mad okay
peace
Good luck

[miss.cool]

hey karim
im talking to both karims hhh

amazing one i should say
yeah u r not lonely u got the best fans n members in the world
you never go alone
just keep makin poems even if someppl doesnt reply or leave a comment doesnt mean they didnt like it
maybe they didnt get it
n i have to say its kinda hard to understand what u write from the first time readin it
coz the meaning is soo deep
u read n u say aaah i got it !what wait naa !wait i'll read it again
its like watching a movie for the first time u like it
u watch it again u understand new things the 3rd time u want to know whats the point of all this n u got it at the end

>>>Sara stop blabling


im back bro
im always around even if im quiet
just the forum these days is a really quiet
no topics!nothin
whats wrong



anyway


loved the poem loved every word of it
we want more of that two karims kinda poem hh


keep it up
peace

[pretty _ girl]

omg i like it

thx bro you 'are the best

=) good luck

have a nice day

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