Imiss you

[khadidja92]

it s a great peom but i knw u can to better keep going

[hoho023]

thank u so much khadidja92

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Yeah that's so great your words are depicting your characteristics of recalling memories that you left to that one you are missing but with your pure heart I know how someone feel when he is hurt or want to back to what he had but he can't that's awsome I wish you will eb back together to that person you love from my deep heart I hope it for real___By the way your writing is so good and welcome to these forum keep writing okey good luck

[rock-girl46]

nice but if u really want to write a great poem
u need to live the event
keep going

[newflower]

excellent brother i hope t share us more with ur true feelings
thanx bro..

[نسرين ز]

thank u for this subject and i wont to tell u we all messing to somone so we know how u felt and i hope he accept u're apology