what do u think about it ?

[El Hadi Ziat]

Hi,

You have bright ideas and you know very well how to adjust rhymes to meet the poem requirements; congratulations. However:

you check some of your spelling and grammatical mistakes. Moreover; it will be wonderful if you increase you vocabulary knowledge so that you acquire new words; and the poem will be sweet.

in overall; your piece of work was really good and ambitious; continue your nice work with effective improvements


regards;

[RafDe]

Very Nice, perfect words , Mashalloah

[RafDe]

Very Nice, perfect words , Masha Allah

[valar]

I loved it wow keep writing darling

[أميرة مملكة السعادة]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة RafDe

Very Nice, perfect words , Masha Allah

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة valar

I loved it wow keep writing darling

thanx brothers that's so kind of u please keep reading my poetry