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قديم 2012-08-01, 22:35   رقم المشاركة : 16
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة shila مشاهدة المشاركة
w.o.w
mashaa allah
amaising
Thank you thank you thank you
Welcome home.








 


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قديم 2012-08-01, 22:36   رقم المشاركة : 17
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jimmy The Rap Soldie مشاهدة المشاركة
wow................... that's a great one home boy ..... i believe your place in the top .......... where you belong .......... besides 2pac and biggy ...... keep it coming dawg .... peace out


Hey “Jimmy The Rap Soldja”
Wassup man! Nice to see you in the Rap neighbourhood. look 2pac, Notorious Biggie, Eazy E oh man I always consider them the Legends of the Rap industry, three most valuable “playaz”
you know I’m a great FAN of them even among NIGGAZ themselves but you know our societies are different and you know staffs like that but thanks God I’m wise and I know how to deal with it. No imitation just for a pleasure and developing my culture, vocabulary, Dialect…etc
hey I understand what you mean with the world “Dawg”, this one only NIGGAZ or great fans of Gangsta Rap understand and I think that your favourites are similar to mine don’t you homeboy, peace up man.









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قديم 2012-08-01, 22:37   رقم المشاركة : 18
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة lilo rok مشاهدة المشاركة
God ! l

While reading your poem I made up my own beat n start singing it ( like seriously have you ever thought of turning this poems into songs?! ) l

So yeah , I'm speechless for the moment ^^' "can't write a comment that you worth" , I give you a big
"thumb up" keep it up n share what you have with the world ^^ , I mean who knows maybe a famous rapper will ask you to write his next song l

mmmmm...yeah I can't find anything else to say , just keep it up n
inShallah you'll have a good future

Oh n in case you thought about the
"idea" of turning it into a song I'll be here to design your "Album cover" I adore making posters with PS (I did some covers to my friends n they were satisfied with my work) l


Peace (can't wait to read your next poems) l

yeah I am happy you like it I feel that, listen during reading sometimes I just write then the poem or the lyrics when I decide to rap on them I have to change many words you know coz It’s not suitable for the “beats”, this one Is suitable for any beats not like the previous ones.
Don’t worry about what your passing means so much don’t care hhhh.
Ah emmm about the posters and Album covers I appreciate your help really really really, one of my biggest dreams is to making albums until know I can make three albums just in one year I’ve 6 lyrics in Arabic all of them with hard tactics no playing, and you know others are in English. This dream is impossible to be achieved you know why?
I can make a song, beats, lyrics…In Rap I’m too fast as just like Chomakhar driving a Car.
I know many people who got a studio and they propose to help me, I denied the Idea.
The Rap industry in Algeria is unfortunately low as you see no one care for the Rap coz it’s mad and hard Vs Corruption but some fake rappers depicting the Rap just like Rai and pop but it’s not people can’t understand what the real Rap is? If I Rap who care for what my Rap is about?
Music Is a taboo think it’s a sin in our religion, and I am about to teach English somewhere and you know In Algeria there is no respect for personal lives.
In case I got no job and passion is gone then I’ll be an outlaw for real and I do my Rap and don’t care what the consequence is. I’ll do it not for commercial issues, just like a “Dragon he need to let fire out from his mouth” this is my case.


Ah about the next one will be hard again I finished two accomplished works for a two weeks ago I just did not want to publish them. The third one is not finished yet. I tell you what (hold your head while reading them).









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قديم 2012-08-01, 22:38   رقم المشاركة : 19
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amel nina مشاهدة المشاركة
that's really the most amazing poem I've ever read


I liked the subject you dealt with, good kareem and bad one, then the good triumphs over evil at last


your words are well chosen, there's a connection between the ideas and lines




and what i adored most, is that u included my name hhhhhhh, I really appreciate it from you


honestly, I'm so proud that our favourite forum has such a talent, I'm surely convinced that you'll have a promising future, u have to keep it up that way

cuz ur the best brother

Hey, thank you for passing I really appreciate that. Good and Bad kareems are existed in my writing always and some of my next writings will include these two characters I don’t know something like telling stories, tendencies in poems. I just want to try that.
And I’m proud of you too, talents are everywhere but they’re invisible.
The thing that make me stop smiling is that Brothers and Sisters always tell me that I’ll have a promising future but in fact there will be nothing you know why?
As soon as “Khalida Tomi” and the pretending responsible for Cultural affairs is inviting Illissa, Melissa…..etc there will be nothing except “Culture from Garbage” you’ll find a big huge Grave written on it (Culture) and the funeral was held a long time ago and I’m sorry I was not in.
As soon as we’re still talking about Batata in the street there will be nothing promising.
As soon as I see grand Mamas talking on Nahar TV that they’ve nothing there will be nothing promising.
I’m not hopeless but this is a truth.













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قديم 2012-08-01, 22:39   رقم المشاركة : 20
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hind_dz مشاهدة المشاركة
Wooow wooow wooow

I'm truley n honestly amazed by ur poem

u really R a great writer honestly .. i thought i was reading some rap song lyrics

keep it up

Hey, Hind how are you doing. I really liked your comments hhhhh and yes they’re seen like that. Wait for more coz there still so many, enjoy.









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قديم 2012-08-01, 22:40   رقم المشاركة : 21
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♫ وهج الأمـل ♫ مشاهدة المشاركة

Great job brother

I've read many of your poems but this one is completely diffrent

It's amazing

Keep writing you're great

Oh Really thank you Sis, this is different coz itself is different from previous ones.
You’re Amazing too thank you God save you.









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قديم 2012-08-01, 22:41   رقم المشاركة : 22
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maymay مشاهدة المشاركة


May god forgive you..


Hey Maymay thank you and welcome back.
I noticed you were عضو محضور
I wanted to make a manifestation here to make you back.









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قديم 2012-08-01, 23:57   رقم المشاركة : 23
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i'll come back soon ,
hh, it's tooooooo long
hhh ,










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قديم 2012-08-02, 07:02   رقم المشاركة : 24
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good luck bro










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قديم 2012-08-05, 00:59   رقم المشاركة : 25
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Thank you man










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قديم 2012-08-06, 00:15   رقم المشاركة : 26
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That's what i'm talking about the alive talent that never dies
thats the fighter that i know
i'm super happy to see you are writing again
i like your poem it is all good in good
i like the idea of showing thse two contrary sides that fight inside every one of us
but i think that i missed something
cuz between the lines you are saying a lot
i'll read it again and again to get it more
Thanks for mentioning my name
and i came back to say
that i didn't run away
i was just lost inside sad life
that gets harder every day
and be sure if i had the choice
i'll surely choose to stay
this is my home this is the gate
of a dream that might find the way










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قديم 2012-08-07, 00:48   رقم المشاركة : 27
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
That's what i'm talking about the alive talent that never dies
thats the fighter that i know
i'm super happy to see you are writing again
i like your poem it is all good in good
i like the idea of showing thse two contrary sides that fight inside every one of us
but i think that i missed something
cuz between the lines you are saying a lot
i'll read it again and again to get it more
Thanks for mentioning my name
and i came back to say
that i didn't run away
i was just lost inside sad life
that gets harder every day
and be sure if i had the choice
i'll surely choose to stay
this is my home this is the gate
of a dream that might find the way



yeah thank you for passing by I appreciate that why you're absent these day actually I'm absent too but i've a reason for that coz I'm busy and I told before for the idea of mentioning your names I just like that and the idea of two karims is the thing that i'll apply for mty next poems i hope you will lie them thank you









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قديم 2012-08-07, 18:47   رقم المشاركة : 28
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life مشاهدة المشاركة
yeah thank you for passing by I appreciate that why you're absent these day actually I'm absent too but i've a reason for that coz I'm busy and I told before for the idea of mentioning your names I just like that and the idea of two karims is the thing that i'll apply for mty next poems i hope you will lie them thank you
No need to say thanks man you've said every thing
you've got all my respect
may Allah help you in whatever you are busy at
i've got reasons too for being abscent these days
but it's not what you think
cuz you've never done anything to make me mad okay
peace
Good luck









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قديم 2012-08-08, 01:31   رقم المشاركة : 29
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hey karim
im talking to both karims hhh

amazing one i should say
yeah u r not lonely u got the best fans n members in the world
you never go alone
just keep makin poems even if someppl doesnt reply or leave a comment doesnt mean they didnt like it
maybe they didnt get it
n i have to say its kinda hard to understand what u write from the first time readin it
coz the meaning is soo deep
u read n u say aaah i got it !what wait naa !wait i'll read it again
its like watching a movie for the first time u like it
u watch it again u understand new things the 3rd time u want to know whats the point of all this n u got it at the end

>>>Sara stop blabling


im back bro
im always around even if im quiet
just the forum these days is a really quiet
no topics!nothin
whats wrong



anyway


loved the poem loved every word of it
we want more of that two karims kinda poem hh


keep it up
peace










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قديم 2012-08-30, 10:41   رقم المشاركة : 30
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omg i like it

thx bro you 'are the best

=) good luck

have a nice day

D:










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