♫Alone at home♫

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison

hi girl
you are really tallented
excellent job
you have a wild imagination hhhhh
i really wonder hat happened next

this poem reminds me of a song
Fireflies
by Owl City

Wow...thanks,you're very nice
I got mad at my mom of course

that's great,but why does it remind you of that song?

[Black_Poison]

cuz in that song he says

why do i tire of couting sheep
when i'm far too tired to fall asleep

[Black_Poison]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rO3gg2cVfxg
check it out

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rO3gg2cVfxg
check it out

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i see : D
thanks for the link

[amel nina]

at first time, I thought it was a horror story not a poem HHHHHHHH
any way, it's great and nice
keep going

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amel nina

at first time, I thought it was a horror story not a poem HHHHHHHH
any way, it's great and nice
keep going

Thank you sister

[amel nina]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥

Thank you sister

you're welcome

[david beckham 23]

what about this

Do not try to run away
Face your problems every day
Get red of your sadness and live happily
Your smiles will be the perfect gifts
That heal the wounds of people's hearts
Always help those in need
To be satisfied indeed
Smile and smile and smile
Smile and smile and smile
Smile for a new day to see
The beauty of nature that makes u free

[Narcisse95]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥

My first poem,since I'm bored..
Hope you like it~

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*I'm at home alone*
*Suddenly I hear the ringing of the phone*
*I nearly die of fright*
*and it's late at night*
*There's no use of trying to sleep*
*and there's no point of counting sheep*
*A shiver came from my core*
*Because there is killer outside my door*
*I walk slowly to face my fate*
*I open to find that it's my mom looking great*
*I stare with a glare and say : WHY WERE YOU LATE???*

I realy like it
you jst carry on
Good luck •••

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة david beckham 23

what about this

Do not try to run away
Face your problems every day
Get red of your sadness and live happily
Your smiles will be the perfect gifts
That heal the wounds of people's hearts
Always help those in need
To be satisfied indeed
Smile and smile and smile
Smile and smile and smile
Smile for a new day to see
The beauty of nature that makes u free

That's really good ,
thanks for sharing it with us!

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Narcisse95

I realy like it
you jst carry on
Good luck •••

I'm glad you like it..
thank you very much

[rola.29]

Hey !! i get the poem again !!! hhhh

When i read it this time, it's always the same wonderful poem, i've read there's more than a month
hhhh..... it's cool

so do u drink milk now or not yet ??? hhhh
it's summer, i'm suffering toooooo much , i'm not afraid , but i cant' sleep

there 's too days, it was 3.15 minutes and i didn't sleep

what a Shame

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rola.29

Hey !! i get the poem again !!! hhhh

When i read it this time, it's always the same wonderful poem, i've read there's more than a month
hhhh..... it's cool

so do u drink milk now or not yet ??? hhhh
it's summer, i'm suffering toooooo much , i'm not afraid , but i cant' sleep

there 's too days, it was 3.15 minutes and i didn't sleep

what a Shame

I'm glad you get it ..

Oh my , I don't drink milk in the morning and you say I'll drink it at night ??

You should try to take an afternoon nap ~

Thanks alot =D

[○•ميسون•○]

[ thx]

it is very cooool

[Hillin]

Hello room^^
hey Ikram: a lovely poem, liked so much
u make me sing it more than twice, it remind me of that song of an old man's "what's gonna do" as he sung it on "AMERICA4S GOT TALLENT" show
really it can be a song dear
thx for sharing
Keep it up