A poem for the White cloud (السحاب الابيض) - الصفحة 2

Asolvip · 2013-07-05, 20:32

See! If I wrote them and hid them in my copy book .. No one will read them , you Will feel disappointed and u might stop writing .. And if u published them , they might be stolen ... So what we gotta do?!
Well I'm just writing here for fun only :/

نَازِكْ · 2013-07-05, 20:47

our presious sister deserves it in fact she desrves more and more
yeah she is our savor she saves the forum from death
and thanx sister abir for sharing keep it up

Asolvip · 2013-07-05, 21:12

You're welcome my siSter ! She deserves all the best .. May Allah save her and bless her ...
I wish that this forum keep blooming

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-07-06, 18:52

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Asolvip

See! If I wrote them and hid them in my copy book .. No one will read them , you Will feel disappointed and u might stop writing .. And if u published them , they might be stolen ... So what we gotta do?!
Well I'm just writing here for fun only :/

That's the problem look as you said if you try to keep them in your copybook you won't do nothing and you will not know how they're look like coz this kind of works need the critics i mean the constructive critics to develop what is undeveloped in case we're living in a country that educational forums set in libraries whether public libraries or those of universities but the problem is here students read but not interpret this is the problem of the present days! here a point
the backup plan is to write in Djelfa when you write here it can be stolen what to do I don't even me I write but I don't know what's the fate of my topics I can't advice to write or not this is your personal thing sorry

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-07-06, 18:58

White cloud The English forum savior

Asolvip · 2013-07-06, 22:57

Definitly she is our saviour
She defends on our right like worrior
I really appreciate her hard work

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-07-07, 19:34

Yes We all do ^^

Asolvip · 2013-07-07, 20:35

It's good we got the chance to show ourselves here ... Myself I used to dream to be popular ... But now I think my dream got a piece of hope ... It might come true

*نسيم الفجر* · 2013-07-08, 15:10

exellent!!!! i really like it...

Asolvip · 2013-07-08, 16:27

Thanks a lot .. I hope you could check our other poems