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[Miss Mïsa]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rayhana 1998

now and tomorrow we will start in new subject ok missa

Okey Rayhana

[♥البريئة♥]

the space exploration are very important to be learning more about our universe and to developing all sorts of technologies for living in extraterrestrial environments
but i am against the space exploration because all this is going to take centuries, and the cost will be enormous. there are a lot problems in our planet which must spend money to it . for exemple hunger there are more than million children died because they do not find what they eat for this reason i see that care about our internal problems first

[♥البريئة♥]

i'm waitting your try missa

good luck

[Miss Mïsa]

Science May give us good things but why bother spending alot of money exploring space while it could feed starving all over the world and generally we should make life in earth better before thinking about space , and humanity Requirement should always come first Also there's alot of problem that need to be solved , to save humanity's live ; Like starbing , energy , and wars

i feel like ranii ndour fi nafs el fikra

[Miss Mïsa]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rayhana 1998

the space exploration are very important to be learning more about our universe and to developing all sorts of technologies for living in extraterrestrial environments
but i am against the space exploration because all this is going to take centuries, and the cost will be enormous. there are a lot problems in our planet which must spend money to it . for exemple hunger there are more than million children died because they do not find what they eat for this reason i see that care about our internal problems first

Good job rayhana

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rayhana 1998

the(no need for it) space exploration are(why are,is it plural?) very important to be learning more about our universe and to developing all sorts of technologies for living in extraterrestrial environments
Frankly speaking,it sounds ambiguous to me
can you reformulate the sentence colored

but i am against the(why the ) space exploration because all this is going to take centuries, and the cost will be enormous. there are a lot of problems in our planet which(who's going to spend money,so you'd better identify the person) must spend money to it . for exemple (example)hunger there are(omit it) more than million children died(die,use the present simple because it's something real) because they do not find what they eat for this reason i see that (we should)care about our internal problems first

Best of luck

[toulay]

why bother spending
I prefer,why we spend a lot of money in exploring
and generally,why don't use put since we should make....abut space
a lot of problems
life not live
Best of luck

[Miss Mïsa]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

why bother spending
I prefer,why we spend a lot of money in exploring
and generally,why don't use put since we should make....abut space
a lot of problems
life not live
Best of luck

Thank you so much miss

[hind mimi]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Miss Mïsa

Good job Hind

Your mark is 12.25

yeeeayyyy i did a good job in fact ....thanks i will take intention next time

[hind mimi]

nowadays many people or millions of people especially in third wold countries in Africa and Asia are suffering from hunger while the other interested people say that space exploration is one of the things that causes this problem and they affirm that the world would be so fine without it and it is just a money waste ,let me say that those people are not interested as they think, there is another word which fits them much better which is ignorant because they do not know that science is more important that what they eat everyday, in addition without science they would never be like they are now i mean in the question of food or housing ,simply they do not appreciate science.
for me,i am for space exploration because of many reasons, first of all unlike what other people say it can be one of the solutions of the problem of hunger in the world.
second , science of all it kinds can never cause such this problem , so the solution won't appear when it vanishes
third,space exploration is not created for nothing ,it has its Humanitarian goals
and finally, to get rid of hunger we should take a look on other reasons that take money in vain and they can not serve humanity such as music and dance ,so we should stop wasting money in dance parties etc....
as a conclusion we should never think about underestimating science or not appreciating it ,,, because we will live like animals for ever

[hind mimi]

guys i am going to put my second paragraph in the afternoon.... the one about obesity... so plz can you comment to my first one and you give me the mistakes that i have made ... and thanks... and sorry for not being around you.... cuz i am so busy nowadays we are going to move on to another subject right....?? plz when you choose one ... apply it here and i will put it in the first page for the others to know what we are doing right now,.. it is really messy and i will write it again from the beginning .... hhhh i have been really lazy hh

[♥البريئة♥]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

Best of luck

thank you miss i correct my paragraphe






space exploration is very important to The development of our planet and scientific research . it is an Interesting adventure

but I am against space exploration because all this is going to take centuries, and the cost will be enormous. there are a lot of problems in our planet we must spend money to it . for example hunger there are(omit it) more than million children die the because they do not find what they eat for this reason I see that we should care about our internal problems first
Best of luck

[♥البريئة♥]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة hind mimi

guys i am going to put my second paragraph in the afternoon.... the one about obesity... so plz can you comment to my first one and you give me the mistakes that i have made ... and thanks... and sorry for not being around you.... cuz i am so busy nowadays we are going to move on to another subject right....?? plz when you choose one ... apply it here and i will put it in the first page for the others to know what we are doing right now,.. it is really messy and i will write it again from the beginning .... hhhh i have been really lazy hh

hi how are you hind now is your turn to choose a new subject


we are waitting

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where are you

[Miss Mïsa]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rayhana 1998

where are you

i'm here

? how are u