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[sakina27]

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and if there are any mistake please

The education in Alegeria
The education is our window to the technology and development .unfortunatly if we think we can be in the top without it , it will be like a dream never comes a true since it’s the transmission of civilization .

We suffer from many reasons which made our level bad in education ,first. Our programs doesn’t give us enough information and knowledge that we need in our practical life , beside that. They are too long so we don’t even find time to do our own searches in order to develop our skills .All what we do is studing just to pass the year

Second .the absence of entertainment activities and clubs where the students can express their ideas and opinions, on one hand. they learn how to respect, understand, share and tolerate differences, on another hand. They are major to take time off from the stress of study.

Third. The huge technology that we got nowadays is killing our creation and motivation to study .the most dangers thing is it’s made us lazy .As we deal with that progress .the study should be boring and unexciting .


Fourth. Our community doesn’t give to education its real value and importance .this due to the lack of culture .in addition to other points like poverty , social problems carelessness of parents and some incompetent teachers
On the end .the aim is not speaking or mentioning the reasons the aim is finding solutions because other nations are looking for a good culture when we are looking for a good education .

[ENGLISHlover]

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To English Teachers

i need your evaluation to this article
and if there are any mistakes please

Education in Algeria
The education is our window to technology and development .Unfortunately, if we think we can be in the top without it , it will be like a dream that will never come true since it’s the transmission of civilization. .

Many reasons makes our level in education weak.first, Our curriculum doesn’t give us enough information and knowledge that we need in our practical life .Beside that, they are too long to find enough time to do our researches so we can develop our skills .All what we do is just studying to pass the following grade

Secondly .the absence of entertainment activities and clubs where students can express their ideas and opinions, but i admit that we learn how to respect, understand, share and tolerate differences, and we are major to take time off from the pressure of school

Third, the high technology that we got nowadays is killing our creativity and motivation for school .The most dangerous thing is being lazy .As we deal with that progress .the study should be boring and unexciting .


Fourth. Our community doesn’t give education its real value and importance due to the lack of culture .in addition to other points like poverty , social problems carelessness of parents and some incompetent teachers
In the end .the aim is not speaking or mentioning the reasons, but to find solutions, because other nations are looking for a good culture when we are looking for a good education

التصحيح بالأحمر.
و الله أعلم.

[sakina27]

thank you so much
well i'm technique mathematics student and there will be magazine in our school and because it's my last year there i wanted to participate in it

[theambitious]

hello! i am not a teacher but i would like to help, i think you'd better say " other nations are looking for a good culture while we're looking for a good education" if u mean that they're doing that at the same time and also it's " many reasons make..."
ps: I quite like your article and i totally agree with you