Bleeding love

[moonlight19]

Oh my Lord ! i'm runing into hell!
So far i'm not feeling very well
Every one is on my love yell
I'm suffering,i'm obliged to tell
The truth is that i'm in love fell
I love him and he loves me as well
And our love is pure like Jasmine's smell
So why this nightmares on my hard fell
Oh my Lord please protect me from this hell




Hope u like it

[maghi]

That's great ...I like it ...
your feelings're pure ...
your words're honest ...
wish u the best with your dreams love ...

[moonlight19]

thank you sweety

[wiam sarah]

i really liked how you used an amazing words in a deep way
keep going sweety

[moonlight19]

thank u my dear Wiam Sarah

;-)

[Southpaw]

A poem full of life and love
liked it ^^

carry on dear fellow