your opinions for my paragraphe about amazon forest

[رنيم الجزائر]

it is really a wondreful paragraph but there are soooooooome little mistakes :
the amazon make one of great forest in our blue planet
ladies and gentelmen i have a massage for you, adresses that this amazing forest is very important for our life because it protects and preserves our environment and makes it very pure;so i have a dream that this resource will be always natural and not cantaminated by many opposites like desertification and tabacco smoking and carbon dioxide; i know that you know that all these opposites are our own actions ,so we need other ideas say that im a member interested in protecting environment and make it very beautiful(better) and healthy
i hope that you are happy for listening me and thank you very much for coming and i hope that you understand my message.

hope you accept my correction

peace

[fifi tery]

it is good but you have some mistakes you can replace the amazon make by the amazon is.................in addition we say inportant but we write important
and we write opposite with double p thank you

[minina2601]

thank u all