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2013-02-12, 19:25 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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Don't Cry
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آخر تعديل Jimmy The Rap Soldie 2013-06-21 في 20:02.
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2013-02-12, 20:05 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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OMG |
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2013-02-12, 21:08 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | |||
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Don't cry |
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2013-02-13, 11:00 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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Salam...soul-twin
I won't say this is the best one you have done through your career as a good rapper ...I won't say this poem is full of similes and figurative speech But I want to say that this is so disappointing to sister "Black poison" and, Sister "Miss cool" and me..., so disappointing Brother I would like to inform you and for the first time...look I've been suffering in my life too sometimes give up but sometimes I hold my flag high and say I won't stop right here I won't stop right here hey you miss Gloom you want to take me away I won't go with you I'm staying Strong Miss Gloom I know miss Gloom is always in my room but I behave like it's not home look talking about that matter n your last lines I've been through it and I'm through t these days too and still don't know what to do but I'm trying to face it whatever the consequence is yanawwarameen!!!! talking about death knocking the door of ya neighbors and feeling it around you everywhere that's exactly what i felt when you all have been away and don't know about it well I chose to keep it secret. and no body knew about it I did not tell you all that I've a huge number of problems but I never gave up coz I am a Man and I'm sure I'll over it by what by the reflexive psychology like when I feel sad I stand and say at first no I'm not sad I'm happy then say it again then again and again and if I were alone I would scream and say I'm happy for reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal this is how we do Nigger This is the life of a Rapper This how we supposed to be look do it and let it to destiny I trust a saying that claims The writer or the poet are one of the most miserable people I'm sure about t beginning with myself firstly but what!!! is that my destiny all the time sad no but the reality is how act now Djamel you're strong and I'm sure you will get out of the negative circle you're in it! at least if it's true that you want to go with death live your final days as happy as you can coz the good die is young and the bad one is old me myself I know that I will die in a very young age I trust it but I'm happy and I'm strong enough that miss gloom want to ovecome me. Peace Nigga Be the Nigga With Attitude N.W.A |
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2013-02-13, 13:16 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | |||
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He's NOT giving up |
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2013-02-13, 16:03 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | |||
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this is just hurts
:'( be back with my reply soultwin |
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2013-02-13, 16:10 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | |||
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R u there |
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2013-02-13, 16:14 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | ||||
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اقتباس:
yes dearest rose :'( ... it ain't the end .. it sure isn't ... yes dearest rose we said it can never be too late even within a last breath we'll fight ... and i'm not losing hope darling ... i promised :'( and i'm up to my promise ^^ :'( u won't give up ... i won't give up either :'(
^^ cheer up rose ^^ |
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2013-02-13, 16:15 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | |||
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hi rose i'm here
^^ how r u? and sorry :'( |
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2013-02-13, 16:17 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | ||||
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اقتباس:
don't you
cry :'( :'( :'( |
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2013-02-13, 16:22 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | |||
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Don't be sorry white bird |
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2013-02-13, 16:23 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | ||||
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اقتباس:
you know what soul-mate? :'( ... i won't say anything it's ok
i'll juts make sure i won't disappoint you guys any more and sorry guys for every time you cried sorry for the disappointment |
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2013-02-13, 16:26 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | |||
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I won't .....as long as i know you i won't ....as long as you are here.......i won't :'( :'( :'( I told you the same that day....don't cry you too or else :'( |
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2013-02-13, 16:28 | رقم المشاركة : 14 | ||||
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اقتباس:
i'm really shaking in the presence of such an angelic rose as u r
:'( |
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2013-02-13, 16:28 | رقم المشاركة : 15 | ||||
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اقتباس:
you never disappointed us what makes you think so |
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