Life is a game

[لالة مريومة]

woow thank you

[المستعينة بالله]

thank you....................

[amir kh]

wow so cooooooool thank u sistaaaa....miro prince

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المستعينة بالله

السّلام عليكم

هذه أوّل كتابة لي في هذا القسم

أرجو أن تعجبكم الكتابة

I wrote this when I was in bad mood

"Life is a game"

Life is a game

There is a winner and there is a loser

So you are the player

You need to be a hunter

To be the winner

Everything is a lie

There is no lover

Because the game will be over

Everything aginst you

There is no sister

There is just the killer

So you mustn't be a failure

Because no one can help you

No mother no father

There is no brother

You are in the picture

So you need to be a hunter

You must be a good fighter

So do it better

To win this game faster

And to be the master

If you wanna be the winner

And if you are the loser

Life will say :"the game is over "

"and you can't try again"

"and Ican't wait"

"because you are late"

أتمنى أن يعجبكم هذا

your sister

best greetings sis
i hope you're doing fine
^^
well
it's a very beautiful poem
but dark
you really managed to express the emotions and mood you were going through
.....
yeah ... actually life's a game
...
and may be more than a just a game
..
some times i even see it like an evil spirit
.
separates people ... and then gathers them again just so she can separate them once more .. just to have fun
^^
i can see through your poem that you were extremely mad
really
when you manage to express your feelings this perfectly means that you're a very good writer
...
I'm really exited to see more from you
....
thanks for sharing sis
...
sorry about talking very much
..
hhhh
.
keep it up and do never give up
^^
your bro ... jimmy
^^

[منال2009]

it's really very nice
good luck

[أسماء أماني*]

Very godddddddd dear,
Keep smiling

[المستعينة بالله]

thank you all of you