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2012-07-29, 00:14 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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Gift to people I like
Gift to people I like
Hey sorry to be late I Was busy writing some topics on “English Learning” section. I present this humble words to Djelfa members and sorry for those whom I did not mention their names, I decided to post it here. I wrote this small poem in approximately one hour. During reading you’ll find that this one is about a conversation between two Karims bad one good one, one written in black and the other in blue. I don’t know how the idea invaded my mind hhhh. Read it carefully and focus on the last lines hhhh, Enjoy J Gift to people I like Being against walk the walk talk the talk I talk what I want to talk don’t care for the folk Fight I except wherever I walk I got no respect for others views And my arm is here again and I’ve to use I oppose coz I’ve nothing to lose can you suppose Yeah, go ahead man; I think cowards have hearts like a plastic Got many friends lovers as fantastic They’re popular even they’re sent to Jupiter Me dima karah lonely just like black colour Schools, universities and they got their seats They got love in between they take places They’re seen cute but they’re so rude I see ya man You’re Sinking in your solitude People Always call you the dude Oh man keep yourself out of this You don’t deserve this do they really fit And you Gotta trust the fates Many gates oh baby many gates Hey homie you’ve to listen to me Every body is running from me Why I always on my backyard Making my Rap’s rhyme wild Like Mike Tyson I was supposed to be But never mind I believe in destiny I’m sure your heart is pure They’re the fool they need the cure Be ready to hopefulness procedure You’re hated by the double face Wherever you go you leave a trace You need to continue the race Yeah, that’s the problem “you know” No it’s not right for no more Take a look to the old days before And now! A brand new persons real friends Read what they wrote with their hands Devil is widespread and this is a fact Aspects like that you need to expect You’re not lonely you got that, stand that Djelfa’s members wish you the best They’re loyal even they’re virtual You need them just like car need fuel Yay Yay But I saw that in a different way I was easy to take a fray When I remember that I just laugh I realised they’ve nothing except love Oh my God I looked like I was negative I tried to be positive even though sadness I live Look how You’re sensitive Now open your love’s package Everybody deserves your message hey look! I arranged this for so long But hopelessness tied my tongue I must confess I was hopeless Words I’ve said full of ridiculousness Sorry it was not my intention As Nana said “When I mention your name The pain I feel ashamed” Attention Sorry for every one I misunderstood I like you but darkness was my mood Oh man this tastes so Good This is for every one don’t run Black Poison just come back don’t run Miss Cool come back here soon Fly Boy hey thank you غزلانhey thank you too Xchow come back let’s go to the studio حكاية قلب where’re you where do you go إبتسام you made me write this you know Hillin hey let’s keep playing Amel Nina is waiting Rola l’écriture mais bien sur le texte est dure Quand je pense au passé le présent et le futur l’état est fur et à mésure Donc je fais des paroles contre la dictature Je vos propose de reste des amis Français ou Anglais c’est la même famille Kiki I’m happy for you frankly May May need you to forget the fight Muslims hearts is white right You all are Djelfa’s forum light Eastside, Westside, North-side, Southside We’re united in Algeria’s Inside Administrators I need an upgrade J Of course If you don’t mind J
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2012-07-29, 10:49 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | ||||
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اقتباس:
Awsome
Congratulations friend Really it's wonderful I liked...I liked it for two reasons it's pretty expressive and Good Karim who won at the end this is Great coz I c that you're drawing a new good path the path of hope so ur"re n't hopless any more you wanna changes u struggle& challange u're ambitious and all these words means one thing..........HOPE so Congratulation again Oh by the way thank u for mentioning my name in your poem it's really kind of u as it's my pleasure to be among those you like Hope that there is no one u hate Wishing u all the Best Keep in touch |
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2012-07-29, 11:50 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | |||
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!! peace up |
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2012-07-29, 16:21 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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إبتسام you made me write this you know |
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2012-07-29, 16:22 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | |||
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دائما متألق ورائع |
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2012-07-30, 00:40 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | |||
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w.o.w |
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2012-07-30, 04:16 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | |||
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wow................... that's a great one home boy ..... i believe your place in the top .......... where you belong .......... besides 2pac and biggy ...... keep it coming dawg .... peace out |
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2012-07-30, 13:33 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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God ! l
While reading your poem I made up my own beat n start singing it ( like seriously have you ever thought of turning this poems into songs?! ) l So yeah , I'm speechless for the moment ^^' "can't write a comment that you worth" , I give you a big "thumb up" keep it up n share what you have with the world ^^ , I mean who knows maybe a famous rapper will ask you to write his next song l mmmmm...yeah I can't find anything else to say , just keep it up n inShallah you'll have a good future Oh n in case you thought about the "idea" of turning it into a song I'll be here to design your "Album cover" I adore making posters with PS (I did some covers to my friends n they were satisfied with my work) l Peace (can't wait to read your next poems) l |
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2012-07-30, 17:48 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | |||
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that's really the most amazing poem I've ever read |
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2012-07-31, 00:24 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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Wooow wooow wooow
I'm truley n honestly amazed by ur poem u really R a great writer honestly .. i thought i was reading some rap song lyrics keep it up |
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2012-07-31, 13:01 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | |||
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2012-07-31, 19:29 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | |||
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2012-08-01, 22:31 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | ||||
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اقتباس:
Best wishes and Ramadan Karim. |
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2012-08-01, 22:32 | رقم المشاركة : 14 | ||||
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اقتباس:
Hey Kiki thank you for passing too, I really appreciate your comments. My writings would be nothing If there were not djelfa’s members encouragement. It’s my honor too to be among Djelfa’s family.
May ALLAH guide you through the right path. Best wishes and Ramadan Karim. |
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2012-08-01, 22:33 | رقم المشاركة : 15 | |||
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إبتســـــــــــام |
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