Beyond Shadows

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"Beyond Shadows ;;
Leaves are silently dancing;
Winds are silently whispering ;;
My destiny is silently swaying ;;
Even me ,i’m silently dying ;;”
Here ;
These hidden wounds drawn by fate seem very obvious,
These pains reflected on the clouded moon are very grievous ;
Here ;
No body can lie truth is something holy and so precious,
Tomorrow would never bring new things, thus I’m no longer anxious,
From my place here ,by my misty- eyed i’m watching my destiny,
Watching the same flashback ;the same memories i’m facing my fragility,
Yeah ,here i ‘m living surrounded by my fears ,living my fate
Drawing my own world ,the world that drowns in shade
Looking for something i truly lost years a go
Escaping from another ,what 's that thing ? i really don’t know
All i know is that it was predestined to be who i ‘m
I know that living here is the most hurting pain
I can’t help ;i’ve been taught shade is the best hiding place
Where,fate’s cold hands marked a visible trace in my scratched face
Could that be real ?or it’s merely an illusion i’m jailed inside
But here there’s only truth? ,got no answer only my echo still resounds
No answer,the cracks my heart is holding are getting larger and larger
No answer, I’m still watching my destiny while time is getting tougher
I can’t fight ;this fate can’t be beaten
Gotta keep watching because it’s already written
From my place here ;
I’m watching my destiny about to dash still not anxious at all
Looking for something , escaping from another, waiting for death’s call

"beyond shadows;
stars’ far lights are gently flickering;
hell’s wild flames are gently burning;
heaven’s pure smells are gently diffusing;
and death’s killing shivers are gently spreading”;

[amel nina]

I'm very happy to be the first one to comment on your thread.

The poem is amazing, I liked it very much. Hope you post more and more in the future because I believe you have such a great talent.

[bainf]

That's a great work, Good luck, Looking for forward works

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amel nina

I'm very happy to be the first one to comment on your thread.

The poem is amazing, I liked it very much. Hope you post more and more in the future because I believe you have such a great talent.

thank you dear sister for passing by i'm grateful for what you've said ,your words gonna push me hard to improve & i'm even happier to see ya around again take care^^

[SuperMarket]

Very nice poem, thanks for sharing

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة bainf

That's a great work, Good luck, Looking for forward works

first welcome between us here;thank you i appreciate you passing by ^^

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة SuperMarket

Very nice poem, thanks for sharing

ah that's good you like it ;thanx brother

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Sorry i've been away i've just seen it i'm going to comment later after reading it...carefully

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nah bro do never apologize i know you weren't around otherwise you would reply & your place is always reserved ^^waiting for your comment hope it's free mistaken,

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Intisar How are you sister I hope you’re doing well; well I read this masterpiece so many times to understand it well and as the once before very dark and deep in meaning the theme include every time the unique style of writing you’re for sure have some more and more this is a real talent I can call it words in the right position. I think there are no mistakes except for:
Misty eyes…..
Misty-eyed: feeling full of emotion as if you are going to cry.
I’ve lost….ago…
Ago is used with the past simple, and present perfect used with the very near past.

I really liked it

W.o.W

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

hey I have something for you

well this is a Cachet you can use it and it's made on the PNG form so as it can put on scanned papers like this one

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life

Intisar How are you sister I hope you’re doing well; well I read this masterpiece so many times to understand it well and as the once before very dark and deep in meaning the theme include every time the unique style of writing you’re for sure have some more and more this is a real talent I can call it words in the right position. I think there are no mistakes except for:
Misty eyes…..
Misty-eyed: feeling full of emotion as if you are going to cry.
I’ve lost….ago…
Ago is used with the past simple, and present perfect used with the very near past.

I really liked it

W.o.W

welcome again brother ;me,i'm fine hmd though i'm really confused we are not studying it's been 5 weeks now it's like watching your future collapsing without being able to change a single thing, never mind
happy to read your comment and i'm even happier that you corrected my mistakes it's really rare to find someone like you who doesn't only read but analyse as well; i'm gonna learn from you more n more so thank you ,really.
well, i was trying to say that it's ok we can't surpass our fate but we shouldn't wait for death ,knowing that we are gonna die doesn't mean giving up on living , n that place is made only by fears it doesn't exist ;;;;;
i'll correct my mistakes and thanks for the cachet it will be useful i'll keep it ^^

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

well it's my duty since the 1st day I signed up in Djelfa Forum it was my first rule to make any member wanna stay in here and share us what he or she thinks and about
I did not know that you study in the Lycée good luck for your Bac
and about those Teachers li makhafouch Rabi day3ou 4 semaines w zadou wasskhoulna som3a ta3 les professeurs
7assbiya allah w ni3ma elwakil
hada man9oul
good luck for you intisar take care

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life

well it's my duty since the 1st day I signed up in Djelfa Forum it was my first rule to make any member wanna stay in here and share us what he or she thinks and about
I did not know that you study in the Lycée good luck for your Bac
and about those Teachers li makhafouch Rabi day3ou 4 semaines w zadou wasskhoulna som3a ta3 les professeurs
7assbiya allah w ni3ma elwakil
hada man9oul
good luck for you intisar take care

yeah i guess every one's duty is to make this place a better one a "home"
ih, i don't blame teachers you know for me they are so holy "not all" but our "DOLA"is the worst thing ever ,"ykhamo b rjlihom "never mind;we stoped care for each other years a go so now it's not a new thing evrey one is looking for his own benefit

inchallah i'll do my best to get it ;