Hey you ^^
So, first of all I like the story it's really intringuing & it makes you wonder what happened & what's gonna happen next...You had my attention there!! =p
But there were a couple of mistakes in your orthography & some expressions you could've written better, also you should use ponctuation, so we can read easily & understand where we're going, because without it, I kind of got lost because I couldn't understand if you've finished an idea & passed to another one, or if you're still talking about the same thing, for example the last part, you could've done this:
From the path the screams just kept on rising, my feet couldn't stop shaking, I thought to myself: "How did I end up in this horrific night?".
Suddenly the screams stopped. I swallowed my fear and turned my head to the road, there was a lady walking in heavy steps that caught my eye, I naively thought she was injured i asked her: "Hey madame are you alright?" then she looked at me, I couldn't forget her face, she had extremely red skin & when I was trying to look at her eyes, I realized...She didn't have any.
I took two steps back while her develish laugh was slowly rising to become unbearable screams, my ears couldn't handle it, so i started running and running, not knowing which way to take, or which way to trust..
I think it's better this way & it's so much easier to read & understand...I hope you don't mind the changes I've made, I'm only trying to bring some improvement...I hope you don't mind my constructive criticism either xD
Anyways, I really like the story & I hope you'll be posting the rest of it in here, so I can find out what's gonna happen next...Best of luck darling ^^