My life is a lie

[Asolvip]

When I close my eyes I see butterflies
But when I open them all I see is lies
The world is like a dark night
And there's no small hole for the light
But I'm waiting for the truth to come out*
Today or tomorrow, it will come out
But when I know it I won't freak out
Because I'm sure , it's another lie
I tried to escape but I couldn't survive
I couldn't even stay alive
I struggled but liars dug my back with knives
They said I'm bad and I'm always mad
And that's what kept me all the time alone and sad
But I tell you liars , this is me and I don't pretend
I'm original and not fake
So you'd better take a shot break
And stop lying and giving and take
Because you'll lose at the end*

[Katy Pretty girl]

i realy luvd it
gd job

[Asolvip]

Thank you .. This was my first poem ...

[Maria Rap 4 Ever]

really good
i liked it so much

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

hey are you sure this one was the best...t seems so recently written coz it's so organized and cool keep it up

[Asolvip]

Surprise ! This was the first poem I ever wrote
I dont know but it really shows my true feelings