Hope swaying between life and death

[نَازِكْ]

Hope swaying between life and death
Somewhere between the lines of destiny….
A blossom wraps around it mystery
Blooming on an open wound
Trying to cut the last bond
Yeah,the last bond with past
Struggling against time which is so fast
It cries,just a little but it cries
Get bored of their lies
Waiting for the sun rise
Growing up with hatred spreads in the thorns
Facing alone the coldest storms
Living on a tight spot of light
Suffering from sleeplessness every night
Trying to bring its sight back
But the past still a hold back
Wanting to forget,to forget that treason stab at the back
It cries,just a little but it cries
Oh ma rose ;;;;
Get rid of the fear that you wear
Anguish and pain that you bear
They wanna u to be the past slave
Calling u what a knave
Just let the past go
Even if they say no
Hold on that gleam of hope even if it’s swaying between life and death
Hope u ‘ll like it
peace

[saya2011]

peace be upon you
...... Intissar
I read your words more than 3 times
really I found are very wonderful
but in the next time you have to be more optimist than now
good buy
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little Misprint ;
storm,thorn

[نَازِكْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة saya2011

peace be upon you
...... Intissar
I read your words more than 3 times
really I found are very wonderful
but in the next time you have to be more optimist than now
good buy
ــــــــ
little Misprint ;
storm,thorn

slm saya sis
did u watch black cat ur name remind s me of it
thanx for passing by
it's a pleasure for me
thanx for the note i didn't pay attention to the mistake now i correct it
i wasof line hh my brain is not with me these days
thanx again

[Black_Poison]

OMG
where the gell have you been hiding
you have a great tallent
and what i fellt as i was reding this...is the same i feel when i'm writing mine
Just ...you're reflecting your soul on lines
Telling a life story between the lines
i got them :'( every bleeding wound
i got it....all of it
Darling....You have such a white heart
Don't Let them ruin it
cuz ....They'll be payed
and ....wounds taken by destiny ...will be healed by destiny

Keep up writing
You're amazing
^________^

[نَازِكْ]

holla blossom white
nah i'm not that much good
i was hiding my writtings
in a grave
i seal it with my hatred
i wrote alot but one day i cut them all
they were as a curse mark
fllowing me
but i told ya it's a new begining
so i have to stand up again
but i'm watching my back
hi sista we are in touch
remember
our philosophy
u know smth one day my teacher of english told me that i write with a great philosophy
guess why
if ther's someone great it'll be absolutely u
u are amazing and i luv ya
n___________________________________________n

[Asolvip]

Wow, so nice girl, I like it so so much ! I just can't stop reading

[نَازِكْ]

thanx sister for passing by
that means a lot for me

[bouchra bou]

wow !! wonderful words with deep meanings
u r a great writter darling
so keep it up ok nd try to be more optimistic next time
there's nothing in this life can obliges us to lose HOPe because ALLAH is always here with us
PEACE

[نَازِكْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة bouchra bou

wow !! wonderful words with deep meanings
u r a great writter darling
so keep it up ok nd try to be more optimistic next time
there's nothing in this life can obliges us to lose HOPe because ALLAH is always here with us
PEACE

first welcome betwwen us sis
thanx for dropping by
yeah u are right
as long as OUR ALLAH is with us we shouldn't lose hope
+i'm not that great sis i'm only a girl trying to get rid of the past

[Black_Poison]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995

holla blossom white
nah i'm not that much good
i was hiding my writtings
in a grave
i seal it with my hatred
i wrote alot but one day i cut them all
they were as a curse mark
fllowing me
but i told ya it's a new begining
so i have to stand up again
but i'm watching my back
hi sista we are in touch
remember
our philosophy
u know smth one day my teacher of english told me that i write with a great philosophy
guess why
if ther's someone great it'll be absolutely u
u are amazing and i luv ya
n___________________________________________n

Yep ^^ new begeining....
I like your Philosophy
btw...i do the same....when i write something for anger or hatered...i SET THEM ON FIRE
just to forget and start all over again
yep ^^ you do great as a writer ...trust me
just don't look back ....just go
there's a better brighter dayy someqhere waiting for you
^<_____________________^
And...No...i'm not that great
^^
Just look around...you'll see what i mean
Gd bless ya

[نَازِكْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison

Yep ^^ new begeining....
I like your Philosophy
btw...i do the same....when i write something for anger or hatered...i SET THEM ON FIRE
just to forget and start all over again
yep ^^ you do great as a writer ...trust me
just don't look back ....just go
there's a better brighter dayy someqhere waiting for you
^<_____________________^
And...No...i'm not that great
^^
Just look around...you'll see what i mean
Gd bless ya

ur words mean a lots for me
thanx sis thnax alot
7amlaghkom atas atas = i luv ya so much
may ALLAH be with u