read it and tell me what you think

[amani b]

hello guys what s up
hope evrybody is good
i decided to put one of my poems here
hope you like it
wating for your comments


hunted : (regrets) :d

it s been so long
sens i hold my pen
so mny feelings to write about
but ink is drying in

guess its my world :what i write
with evry letter
there were a fight
between my mind and what s going through my heart
other times i am so much of a knight
battling through the dark of night
breaking evry single memory
into nice little pieces
guess it never worths it
doing evryhing to keep standing

it s too many ideas
i cant go on..am i crazy
may be i m wrong ..i am talking truth
have no more sens to move on
feels like i am nothing but a rubbish
yet animals keep hunting me
tearing me apart
and evry tie they say :
so yummy so sweet "
i need you baby i need you "

though they are just like drugs
let me say a bad dream
making me frown and smile in the same time
they are such a punishment
they are the cure though
they are what i ve been looking for

in a way or in an other
they keep me strong
and evry time i have that feeling
that they cant take a peace of me
but they do
yes i battle through the sadness
but they do
each take his share
and i am left with the leftovers
but yet for me that s just enough

hope you liked it

love

amani b

[amani b]

no comment

so ?

[miss.cool]

u wrote this ??


if so its amazing
keep it up sis

[xchow]

nice try keep going

[polina03]

woow i'm impressed..i think that it is great
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keep going
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i can't wait for the next one!!

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

yes so good keep going on but why you didn't publish it in the members writing section .....that's true i man your poem good luck or you just keep writing don't be hopeless okeeeyyyyyyy

[amani b]

of caurse i worte it
and i have plany more
i am gonna try to put some other ones here
i ll put it in the writings sections i promess brother
thanks for passing
and glade you liked it

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

never mind it's my pleasure good luck

[sourour 1]

U wrote this ?
it's great
keep going

[rola.29]

hello it's wonderful.. that's amazing
i advice you really keep writing such poems .. send us everyday a one.. Ipromise i'll read them ..
if you keeps wrinting, u'll improve your talent sweety ... it's wonderful
and you're in Constantine, what a honour(bent bladi) ok, taht's fine.
i wanna stay on contact with u via the net

[douki23]

very nice good luck

[amani b]

hhh
it s nice finding someone from my city

soo happy you liked my writing

i love you guys thanks for passing by

[la manita]

its amazing

[AymenAkremi]

مزيد من التقدم ان شاء اللله مشكووووووووور

[ملكة الامتياز]

good but ya have some mistakes there !!