get the hell out of my heart

[lovely friend]

Hello everyone hope u r all good. well, i just wrote this poem and i wanted to share it with you so u can tell me ur comments
hope u'll like it

you r heartless
you r ruthless
and for me now u r just worthless
maybe u r wondering why?! oh u drama king don't
u know the answer is so obvious
,cauze i was always your angel
i was always your gorgeous
and now you r giving up on me
for something we both know it's hopeless
im sure you deep inside know
that i don't deserve the way you treated me
or even the fact that u betrayted me
u know! after all really i dont hate you
but i do hate the fact that im still in love with you
?for crying out loud tell me what's to do
tell me how to step on my heart and be cruel just like you
oh wait i forgot u don't care
u know what? don't even bother
so here some words from me to you
get the hell out of my heart
and u can keep lieing to yourself like you used to do
that will never stop me breathing
but it somehow gonna stop me caring about you

peace

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hi your poem is amazing I like it the fact that made try to reply by a poem of mine but staying in the level of your topic that you made the poem on so i'm here want to ask you if i could reply with my poem to you adding some exitement you know......when you read you will find that it is the reply of the one you are blaming in your poem okey so may i have the chance to publish it.............peace up

[lovely friend]

Hello bro thank you for passing and reply
sure i'll be happy if u write ur own poem here and add some intresting things
im looking forward to read it
regards

[أميرة العرب]

السلام عليكم

im sure you deep inside know
that i don't deserve the way you treated me
or even the fact that u betrayted me

waw it's great

keep going sister

god bless u

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

I feel confused every time i'm in hood
All the time acting like i'm in the wood
Laws are laws strong beat the weak
My honey you were pure as a milk
It was hard to make you Love me
But fast i made you hate me
The lord is going to pay me
If it was my intention to create that situation
Your choise was to hate who I am
You was always mine at that time
I confess you the one i chose
But that happiness had to close
When time goes on every thing goes on
Hold on, understand the situation i was on
They used to say count cheaps to get sleep
I was counting kannibals instead of animals
Troubles everywhere enemie any where
Be ware it was my death in near
All about you all about you
You know they wanted to blow
You and me was a nightmare to them
They wanted to leave us as real victims
My way was to trip away leave away
I never want you suffer every day
I decided to let you alone
When you made that call phone
I couldn't bear your cry and blame
And you now changing my name
You call me worthless and heartless
By that behaviour I lost my place
In your heart i used to be safe
Always passing through the street
Looking after you life
If i'm the drama king so i'm the hero
The hero that is going to die
When the most of the witness lie
To fail and must serve jail cops on my nail
Going back to my swearing to revenge
From those who made us doing like that
Shed many tears shed many tears
Now you have to understand that i never mean no hurt
Never let you cry never want to hide
I'm hoping you change your mind
Turn the tide be on my side
Never trip honey never do that again
My nightmares are increasing again
I was the one who supposed to give you breath
But now how do i breath
Your sweats words are expired
I think they are exported
No my words to you is that the hell in my heart
Is the hell in your heart plus the hell of misunderstanding me
No i don't mind if you go or no
because i show you what was my motifs
love it or hate it that was the case

____to be continued____

[lovely friend]

i really liked it, so great and so deep
yeap i agree there is much in common btw the poem i wrote and the one u wrote
thank u bro for adding ur beautiful and honest poem
sure u can keep going
regards