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Jar of Dreams✿

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قديم 2013-03-13, 20:12   رقم المشاركة : 1
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Black Blossom
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افتراضي Jar of Dreams✿

Good Evening


Jar of dreams

She hid her dreams in dreams’ jar buried in the soil
Replacing blood, with mechanical, survival oil
To boil, underneath a rusted heart of iron foil..
Made of steel, a mind with order’s deal
Eyes of an abusive crow, cold touch of Decembers’ snow
Leaving what rest of her in that jar
Leaving it away so far
Hiding a sense of dreaming child, on dreams land discovering the wild.. in a cloud she rides
How she swirls right round, how she fell laughing on the ground
Hiding a sense of growing girl
inside drama’s troubles she used to twirl
Hopes of a mature female-
imaginations for the perfect charming male
“Tears of an unexpected fail-
tasting people’s betrayal
Suicidal thought-a past’s fault
Tumbling then rise- foolishness turn to wise
_Where im going with my life?
This day wasn’t easy- what did i said ? I was stupid i was crazy_
cold touchs of rain- a leap of pain”


she is not insane, never been lame
and in the end of every night
while creatures diving ,sleeping tight
she dig in dust n stones
burying her feels bones

till that unfaithful day
she left all those dreams away

sweept in the stormy sky
leaving, the living's reason to die
"
What if, it brokes in a hurricane
What if, it got wet with drops of rain
What if,i ll leave what inside my jar
what if,
what if.."

She walked against mainstream
while her life vaporized as steam
That day she left her jar of Dream



ββ
was here









 


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قديم 2013-03-15, 02:54   رقم المشاركة : 2
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Black_Poison
عضو محترف
 
الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
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المرتبة الثانية 
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افتراضي

You really have done a great work in here darling sister
it's amazing....deep....emotional...mysterical....magic al
reflects that feeling of sadness....darkness ...when someone has to let go things that they can't live without

but.....they survive......even if they're not the same anymore

Life is nothing but a serie of disappointements....sometimes it's better to be brave enough...or cruel enough to drain all what someday meant something......deams wishes....happy thought...memories before the fallen masks...racing clouds across the field of innocence...childish dreams...and childish fears....keep them in a jar......and burry it faraway from their reach.....the road is long...and if you keep carrying it...the jar will fall and crash hard on the concrete........sometimes it's better to be heartless objects....at least...we won't feel hurt...at least we will predict the unexpected
....and never expect for more....or dream big....cuz the higher is the climb...the worst is the fall

i hope you'll find the way back to your dreams jar...
I couldn't leave my dreams jar....so....i burried the rest of my self near it in a silent grave... Droping poison on those wounds everytime i feel that life wants to run in me again
I left it opened for a while....to see how life looks like from death's eyes
I exist...but ...i'm not alive
Let's see who can see what was behind the eyes of crow
And once i close the grave...it's gonna be final

Congratulations sis...i'm waiting for your next










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قديم 2013-03-16, 00:10   رقم المشاركة : 3
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worm
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افتراضي

They say that everything happens to you is what was supposed to happen to you for advance

considering that this is real : D









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قديم 2013-03-16, 12:16   رقم المشاركة : 4
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Black Blossom
عضو جديد
 
الصورة الرمزية Black Blossom
 

 

 
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
You really have done a great work in here darling sister
it's amazing....deep....emotional...mysterical....magic al
reflects that feeling of sadness....darkness ...when someone has to let go things that they can't live without

but.....they survive......even if they're not the same anymore

Life is nothing but a serie of disappointements....sometimes it's better to be brave enough...or cruel enough to drain all what someday meant something......deams wishes....happy thought...memories before the fallen masks...racing clouds across the field of innocence...childish dreams...and childish fears....keep them in a jar......and burry it faraway from their reach.....the road is long...and if you keep carrying it...the jar will fall and crash hard on the concrete........sometimes it's better to be heartless objects....at least...we won't feel hurt...at least we will predict the unexpected
....and never expect for more....or dream big....cuz the higher is the climb...the worst is the fall

i hope you'll find the way back to your dreams jar...
I couldn't leave my dreams jar....so....i burried the rest of my self near it in a silent grave... Droping poison on those wounds everytime i feel that life wants to run in me again
I left it opened for a while....to see how life looks like from death's eyes
I exist...but ...i'm not alive
Let's see who can see what was behind the eyes of crow
And once i close the grave...it's gonna be final

Congratulations sis...i'm waiting for your next

I understand
those bunch of feelings has reached me
as well as i beleive that even flowers can bloom inside an open grave

my regards











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قديم 2013-03-16, 12:18   رقم المشاركة : 5
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Black Blossom
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الصورة الرمزية Black Blossom
 

 

 
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة worm مشاهدة المشاركة
They say that everything happens to you is what was supposed to happen to you for advance


considering that this is real : D
let's agree to disagree
: D
just consider it











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قديم 2013-03-16, 13:42   رقم المشاركة : 6
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Bouchra mimi
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افتراضي

HeY sissy how're u hunny

waaaaaaaaaaaaaw

what you wrote is such amazing , meanful ,

i really liked , keep ur hard work

May Allah bless u

waiting for the next

peas










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قديم 2013-03-16, 16:32   رقم المشاركة : 7
معلومات العضو
Black_Poison
عضو محترف
 
الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
الأوسمة
المرتبة الثانية 
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black Blossom مشاهدة المشاركة

I understand
those bunch of feelings has reached me
as well as i beleive that even flowers can bloom inside an open grave

my regards


You got it righ darling
Even in open graves ...flower can bloo
Just like the rose that grew from the crack in the concrete
Long it lives...even when no one else cared

You could see that
this m means you have real eyes too
but
graves are made to be closed ....and then ...flowers will have to fade
:'(
My best wishes sister

you remind me of .....someone ....you really do









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قديم 2013-03-17, 16:24   رقم المشاركة : 8
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Black Blossom
عضو جديد
 
الصورة الرمزية Black Blossom
 

 

 
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Bouchra mimi مشاهدة المشاركة
HeY sissy how're u hunny

waaaaaaaaaaaaaw

what you wrote is such amazing , meanful ,

i really liked , keep ur hard work

May Allah bless u

waiting for the next

peas

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
You got it righ darling
Even in open graves ...flower can bloo
Just like the rose that grew from the crack in the concrete
Long it lives...even when no one else cared

You could see that
this m means you have real eyes too
but
graves are made to be closed ....and then ...flowers will have to fade
:'(
My best wishes sister

you remind me of .....someone ....you really do
thank you dears










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