I'm the king of your heart

[xchow]

title : I'm a king of your heart
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can you see the moonlight reflecting in the ocean's water
can you feel the wind slapping the air
running behind the waves ... maybe rains makes all things fair
baby just close your eyes ... sunshine soon will raise
just hold on for another day ... take me again
make me king of your heart .....
I never forget our first met ... our first wink
our first touch ... your hair that I catch
my dreams with you ... your tears ..... no fears
I really love you when you ask me why ?
then I realize how much I mean to you
born to be with you .... just to you .... I'm yours

[Sàd héàrt]

very nice <3 <3

[aziouazrayes]

You started in a good way then after that the poem went a bit cheesy. Also, you have done few mistakes there. Anyways, just keep on writing and you'll improve.