!Hey u guys
.. So recently I started writing poems n i hope 2 get some honest opinions about my writing
.. i'm only a beginner n i'm trying 2 learn writing better
.. so here's a poem of mine .. i hope u like it
it's short so that u won't get tired of reading
I try, try and try to forget
But all I feel is pain and regret
I try to let go all that is gone
All the trouble where things went wrong
But the past seems to be following me
Haunting me and holding me
From living like human beings
From being happy, pursuing dreams
So, I wish for someone by my side
To understand me, read my mind
But then I look around and see
That no one really cares for me
No love, no friends, no family
Nothing in this world worked out for me