I want to show you my poem

[smart]

thank you so much my teacher..............iam glad that iam making you proud of me
thanks for the passage el motafaela
and we are waiting for the poems

[cute_angel]

good bey
face to face in this place,
tears in my eyes,
heres where the story ends
listen to your lies
all that you do is to apologize,
burning me out from the inside
all alone ,i have cried
we must say good bey!!!
memories,good days, bad days,
they will stay with me always
my broken spirit is frozen to the core
i dont want to be here anymore
i understand
if it makes you feel bad
if it makes you sad
but there is nothing we can do
this is a good bey!!
i hope that you will like it

MashaaAllah my dear honestly and without lies or pretending I say Bravooooooo and Chapeau my dear

it's a great poem

I'm waiting for the new one ok

[smart]

i sent it to you my dear cutie
read it and tell me

[cute_angel]

I read it

Masha'allah too I't's absolutely great with no doubt

And I hope you would share it with the other mebers as soon as possible coz it's wonderful and i'm sure they are eager to read it

[fati_reb]

it s indeed a nice and meaningful poem.....i swear you can go deeper and deeper in english in order to go
farther.good kuck darling.

[smart]

thank you so much
you girls are encouraging me
thanks a lot
may god bless you

[hairless17]

welcome fati reb
smarty is our best young member
we are expecting more and more

[smart]

thank you so much sir
iam trying to do my best
mr,hairless the forum is really booring without you
you have to come back as you used to be

[hairless17]

I have come back
I am always with you

[smart]

thanks sir
i really need a father in the forum

[hairless17]

I am so proud

[smart]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة hairless17

I am so proud

and iam so happy
and my father is really thankful for what you are doing for me

[aliallawa]

I didnt know u r keen on writing poems in english. Congratulations . Just keep on .
yours ALIALLAWA

[ينابيع الصفاء]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة smart

this is my poem
i have a will ...and i will do it
No matter what i face from troubles
I never give up
No matter what happend in my life
I continue my way and i do not stop
No matter what i hear from the others
I never cry and stop
Because i know that my way is the correct
And i have the whole support
And no one can make me stop
And iam going to make it to the top.

I'll be more than another Je serai plus qu'un autre
More than another Plus qu'assez pour toi
I'll be Je serai
x(More)smart...more than a woman (Plus) Plus qu'une femme
x(More) more than another (Plus) Plus qu'assez pour toi

[mina_girl]

i like ur poems so much
u r a good writer
iam also student in secondary school
but i dont know the English ******** like you
i encourage you dear
i hope to be like you