imortel beloved ,poem

[lila_20-20]

you're always on my mind
i'll give you all that i have
i'll be your everything
you lighten my dark nights
i always have concern for you
deep in my heart .Do you on the distant land feel the same
my imortel beloved?

give me your opinion please

[butterfly101]

it's great thx..

[butterfly101]

it's great thx..

how about this :
When I cry you help me out
When I'm happy you hear me shout
When I grin you know I'm really mad
because you are my best friend
You can tell when I'm sad

You're there in thick and thin
You're my best friend
You hear me out when I want to talk
You help me out when I get mad
You are the bestest friend I've ever had

[amina15]

it's great thx..

how about this :
When I cry you help me out
When I'm happy you hear me shout
When I grin you know I'm really mad
because you are my best friend
You can tell when I'm sad

You're there in thick and thin
You're my best friend
You hear me out when I want to talk
You help me out when I get mad
You are the bestest friend I've ever had