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2013-12-20, 17:30 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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The Black Butterfly
peace people
A butterfly ;is flying with no direction as there’s no light Straining its pale wings under the rain After it lost its colors life and death are the same Breaking the nature’s laws Proving that even the black glows Dreaming about an empty dream Trying to cry out a silent scream It’s shaking ;holding weighty secrets along Getting tired of the pretense of being strong It’s wounded ;summer’s wounds can’t be cured in winter It’s astray ;it can barely hear the wind’s whisper It was aimed to reach the farthest stars Now ;it’s following the past’s scars As it belongs to the past ;it threw the future away In its depths ;the urge of dying is increasing day after day Sacrificing its dreams ;waving its wings in farewell Rains are about to stop ;the butterfly hears the loud ringing of the death’s bell Its wings are tingling and stumbling ;it’s really a hard destiny The pure smell after the downpour declares the end of its journey « the breeze is so cold ;the way was so long and the end is so soon » Eventually ;through that thorny long way It reaches the river where it used to play « There ;dawn has just emerged ;with the first fleeting beam it fades away ;;;taking along the heavy burdens of past ;the indelible warped memories ;sadness and pain it shouldered ;even summer’s wounds » THE END
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2013-12-21, 08:59 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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Peace be upon u ^^ |
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2013-12-22, 14:17 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | ||||
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اقتباس:
thank you for dropping by sis n for the sweet comment ;it means a lot for me ^^ best of luck for you too ^^ |
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2014-01-02, 13:10 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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Hello I'm very very very sorry to be late to reply the first day when saw it I wanted to read it slowly and define some words I really forgot their meaning you know I'm gettin g old hhhh then when wanted to reply the conex became amazingly sick hhhhh then day after day I totally forgot to reply I really forgot that there is a new topic and it's not only a normal topic nah it's a kind of a poem that we need to pay an attention to. |
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2014-01-02, 19:09 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | ||||
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اقتباس:
indeed you're able to find out the true story ,a girls 's story who belongs to the past n in the end she came back to the same place she came from holding the same scars the same woundes that she was trying to forget but she overlooks a small trap" she forgot that summer's wounds that can't be cured in winter " ;n small traps cost a lots thus she loses every thing the only things that remain are things she was trying to abandoning them ' thank you brother ^^î really appreciate your passing by your encouragement will push me to improve . |
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2014-01-03, 12:34 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | |||||
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اقتباس:
اقتباس:
the problem of this forum is that it's so slow when you have فوري an I read a topic about it before I don't remember where about the poem the writer knows everything the reader can cover only 50 % at most so good luck for your next Inshallah |
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2014-01-03, 20:35 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | ||||
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اقتباس:
anyway;; yeah i like when i write things that make the readers think about it n give me various opinions ,it's great when someone focus on what you 've written ;;;thank you again brother .....inshallah ^^ |
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