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2011-12-23, 18:31 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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I'm a B girl
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2011-12-23, 19:12 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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Wow |
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2011-12-24, 18:26 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | |||
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Yes I will do ...Just hold on okey I think I would like it |
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2011-12-24, 21:26 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | ||||
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اقتباس:
allah almosta3an, what is this my sister? i have badly tried to match what is in your signature with these words ? or it's just a style ? i khnow that you khnow what doses it mean : a bad girl so ma dear sister ... be aware and don't forget that (( مَا يَلْفِظُ مِنْ قَوْلٍ إِلَّا لَدَيْهِ رَقِيبٌ عَتِيدٌ)) your sister |
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2011-12-25, 10:40 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | |||
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My Rear View
First of all thank you for calling me to correct and post my views I'm really admired by your request yeah whatever we are friends without asking me I do that I just did not notice your topic okey let's see: remember that every member right here make a lot of mistakes so don't be upset for this long list but I guarantee you will learn so much from them Mistakes: walk___I'm Walking I think you should say I'm walking why? because it is your life so: your life is just like in here سلم زمني A___________B___________C A is the past B is the present C is the future you're walking in a narrow path: When you start walking? of course before "b" when will you stop? ofcourse "c" when you do something but you still don't finish it you should use ("to be" in present+Verb+ing) it is called the present Continious In french "le present Progressive". It will be better if you say "I'm walking through a narrow path" treat____Treats you are talking about the way you live so you need to use the present tense because you are describing a present situation....If so the (Fate is a single ) always add "s" to the verbe in case of (she, he, It) enjailed__Jailed_Imprisoned Darkness of the world____Darkness world loud____aloud_loudly_so loud Adverbe comes after verb why "because it describe the way the doer does and action" Adjective come after Nouns my eyes wipe blood___shed tears of bloods Over the game___make the game Over but I know you need to put "game" in the end because of the rhymes so you can just say "I'm waiting just To finish the Game" .....how I am______Who am I? Your poem: The ideas of the poem are a words of a strong Girl "I walk alone in a narrow path" "totally lonely oh it's too hard" you are sinking in loneliness you mentioned the word lonely and alone they are serving the same meaning I guess you're lonely for real the narrow path it is just like you have no other way to achieve your goals. "the fate treat me so bad"__Yeah that's of bad situation but you know what fate is the choise of our GOD and we obey God's willing just be patient God choose for as things to happen whatever they are good or bad even if they are worse there is a wisedom in them just because of God is examining us if we are a real belivers so just hold on my own opinion but don't take it seriously I think you should not say "fate treat me so bad" I don't know If I was you I wouldn't write it ...never be disapointed we all make mistakes remember that. - your soul is jailed by the darkness It is really well chosen words I like it so much -"There is no different if you go or stay"..no one will miss you and care for you if you Go or stay??? I think you mean that don't you?? "Bad Girl" the name that you mention and the way you called that handsome it just like hey you know what "I'm really who I am" you said it in a way of self confident and that's the bad girls do there is to things of expressions...But I think "bad Girl is not appropreatefull I think you are cute Girl..." -self expression______You know how to express your feeling very well -Ideas expression____You know how to write them down ...Gramatical structure and rhymes and vocabulary and so on In poetry I think you should know firstly "Self expression" secondly "ideas expressions" why? If you know how to apply rhymes and grammar and all things but have nothing to say about your self that's terrible and you can do nothing becasue self comprehension is something obligatory about a the gramar and mistakes it's simple and you can just learn more and more progressively by the time but with so works and exercises... I think you know how to express your self but there is just a little problem with Grammar but not a big deal believe me just continue and you need to follow other members writing and especially when someones correct their mistakes you will learn so much. My last words right here just write and "shin shyn" and me are the ones who are supposed to encourage you and guide you why no you are an "algerian Light" don't you?
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2011-12-26, 15:23 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | |||
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can i ask you ?? why you said*there is no différent آخر تعديل برعم امل 2011-12-26 في 15:24.
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2011-12-26, 17:38 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | ||||
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اقتباس:
thaaaanks a looooooooot sister... *enjailed mean مسجون in arabic. I don't know if it is true |
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2011-12-26, 17:42 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | ||||
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اقتباس:
I do a "Massacr" in english..But I'm so happy because I laern a lot of things so thaaaaaaaaaank youu teacher |
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2011-12-26, 17:47 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | |||
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hey you did nothing very bad no it is just a few mistakes so I did correct them ....I'm not a teacher i'm just like you and others hh |
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2011-12-26, 18:38 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||||
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اقتباس:
i mean enjailed § § Karim اقتباس:
Ur a Good teacher and u know it p: |
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2011-12-27, 12:46 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | |||
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Can you be friends to me ?? really i want that......so آخر تعديل برعم امل 2011-12-27 في 12:50.
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2011-12-27, 16:44 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | ||||
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اقتباس:
yeah..you're right..I must forget the and prepare for the next....thank u sis |
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2011-12-27, 16:46 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | ||||
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اقتباس:
wow that's an honor for me.look this my name in f.a.c.e.b.o.o.k. NoUr El Imane. |
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2011-12-28, 12:27 | رقم المشاركة : 14 | |||
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thank you ...............nice to meet you .................me too my name is |
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