Alone In The Dark 2

[amine pop 4 life]

Hello guys
sorry for being late but I was too busy
but here's my second part of my poem "Alone In The Dark" and sorry coz I'm still live in the darkness of my friend's absence ...
enjoy!!!

The hugs are gone
The hurt has grown
And I feel the same
And my heart is alone

I guess it's the best way
To forget u is to say
I don't need u any more
I don't want u to stay

I'll be lying on my heart
If I said I can restart
Coz I'm not that boy stronger
And I know I'm not smart

Cleaning the tears with my hand
Something that makes me understand
How it feel to cry alone
How it hurts to lose a friend


Calling u through the sky
Wish some day you can reply
But I know it's impossible
So don't blame me when I cry

Coz your absence I can't take
I can't handle that ache
I really want to forget
But I'm always acting fake


I say to myself what ever
He will never be closer
I'll be waitng in the dark
It's the only way to remember

[زهرة الربيع]

Hello ! thank u for the poem

i don't know but believe me no one deserve to be sad for u have Allah and family if they are with u u don't have to be sad because they are the only two who really really really care for you
i know that friendship is a big thing cause i have a frien and i love her more than a sister but best friends don't like to see their friends sad

so my friend come back to the light and enjoy ur life

you won't live forever so enjoy since you are alive

may Allah blesse you

peace

[amine pop 4 life]

Well I really thank u for those words but believe me it's hard to forget because he was the only human that knows what I'm gonna say before do and just that feeling of I can't see himagain is killing me
mora than 5 years passed but here I am .... In that place Like I ever was

[زهرة الربيع]

Never mind friend
That's hard i know but after five years i think that you have to move on you have to , a beautiful life is just waiting for you don't let sadness make your life so dark





peace

[Xwriter]

Grief is a bottomless pit. It had swallowed so many people in our world. It swallowed them whole. It all starts from the misconception that the harder we grieve our beloved ones when they leave us, the more proof how much we loved them. There couldn't be a more misguiding fallacy than this one. When the prophet died, his companions reacted in different ways, but the one who loved him most knew the right way to grieve him. He protected his message. He carried on his will. What would your friend do if he was still alive and found you the way you are right now? He would have done anything in his power to yank you out of the darkness, to make you happy, to put the smile again on your face.

When you drench your soul in sorrow, be sure, that you are not honoring his memory. Be sure that you are not proving anything to anyone. You're but wasting your days away in a dim, grim alley, while beauty, sunshine, and happiness are just around the corner. Now, how smart is that? If Allah ever allowed the souls of our beloved ones to roam the earth one more time, they will go straight away to those who grieved them the most and tell them: " Move on. Be happy. We shall meet again in a better place."

However, sometimes when the pain is too great and when it strikes us in a time where we are hollow, it becomes part of us. We attach ourselves to it because we start to believe that pain now define us. It's a dangerous thing when a man embraces pain as a piece of his soul, because, soon enough, the pain will devour the rest of it, and he will be lost forever. You said it's been five years, I hope I didn't step in too late to tell you this: " Allah has his own way to give us back the things he took from us. You just have to be patient brave, step out of the light, and take a good look around you."

I almost forgot, what a wonderful poem you got there.

[Estrella Negra]

I enjoyed reading your poem
Ur lyrics are full of pain
stay strong , nothing deserves
and always know that Allah is with u
so keep holding on

[روح قسنطينة]

i like ur style
u choosed attractive words
nice job bro, the poesy is my only talent n i'm a lover of sadness too
so we can be friends

[whoseen]

so alive though it is full of sadness

[Couby Brayne]

WooW nice =D