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Hate U hate U and Hate U

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قديم 2011-12-18, 17:46   رقم المشاركة : 1
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افتراضي Hate U hate U and Hate U

Title:
Hate you hate and Hate you
By:
Karim Cherifi
To:
Number One Deceiver
I never Thought of that Damn Day
I never Forget that Damn Day
My Heart was stabbed by a big knife
bad memory that still disturb me for life
It was better to kill me instead of what you did
In the pain prison I was convicted
I was the one who Give you happiness
and U the one who gave me sadness
U did it you're so heartless so worthless
from that day I feel sickness
Yeah
I get used to be yours
you used to be Mine
at the end U left me
Yeah
In your love I was believing
On me U were deceiving
My intention was to carry on as partners
U meant to exploit my Kindness
I had heart but U had stone
I think Love is really Gone
I had a blood U had a wine
I was just like spring sunshine
I had maind but U were Blinde
I was kind U were the Devil maind
A man like me is hard to find
I Remind calm was my sign
you promised that on me you'll bind
Now from me U hide
That kills me a thousand times
Now I can't believe in love
I confess U affected me
I'm a man
A man with a strong sensitivity
A man who suffer from casualty
A man who don't use Brutuality
A man who cherished U
A man whose luck is so few
A man with an unconditional Love
A man who appreciate the love
A man who is strict for his love
For you I was ready to die
But from your love you deny
For U I will never cry
On hating U I'll intensify
I never never mean to hurt
I never want to Forget
I was always with U
I felt U wherever I go
I never meant to deceive
only wounds I did receive
My Tears are so precious
Can't Imagine I'm Ambitious
I'll keep struggling
Don't worry she is comming
I still Have a little hope
your love is like a dope
Just like candle in Dark
Like clearness in Fog
U will miss my hug
My heart is so Extended
My power is not expended
My life still expanded
I was your best chance
still they still to chase
the thing that left is Menace
That's the life experience
Hey fence the consequence
Does he talk better than me
Does he love U Indeed
He'll never love U like I did
He'll never care for U like I did
He'll never miss U for real
He'll never feel U Like I did
He'll Never protect U enough
He bought U forceless
I though U priceless
No just get out my world
that's my final word
I
Hate U
Hate U
and
Hate U








 


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قديم 2011-12-18, 18:37   رقم المشاركة : 2
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افتراضي

OMG

like i'm watching a really love story movie
words are good chosen
from the heart
words are honestly wrotten
it's a magical pen
your pen
^^
/
you're Suffering man
your heart is bleading
i can Feel u..
your words like you're Screaming
But silently

it's really sad matter
We are in same Situation
always there' are a pain before my smile
it's like i dont care
but in fact i'm in a painful world
/

i'll tell u....

she will feel Guilty seriosely
cause she lost a Good person like you
*
*
but can i ask u something
is the word
"Hate You"
is really From ur heart i mean
you Mean it ??



//










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قديم 2011-12-19, 14:05   رقم المشاركة : 3
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة shin hyun مشاهدة المشاركة
OMG

like i'm watching a really love story movie
words are good chosen
from the heart
words are honestly wrotten
it's a magical pen
your pen
^^
/
you're Suffering man
your heart is bleading
i can Feel u..
your words like you're Screaming
But silently

it's really sad matter
We are in same Situation
always there' are a pain before my smile
it's like i dont care
but in fact i'm in a painful world
/

i'll tell u....

she will feel Guilty seriosely
cause she lost a Good person like you
*
*
but can i ask u something
is the word
"Hate You"
is really From ur heart i mean
you Mean it ??



//

OMG

like i'm watching a really love story movie
words are good chosen
from the heart
words are honestly wrotten
it's a magical pen
your pen
HHHHH that's the consequence when It come to my pen
He is always afraid of me That I'm hard working
as I told you before when it become to Love matters
My writing is full of rhymes why I don't know?


you're Suffering man
your heart is bleading
i can Feel u..
your words like you're Screaming
But silently

I'm not suffering
My heart is normal
My words are telling the truth

I am just acting like a real man
I really believe in Love I love the one who I decide to
love but believe me when I feel that I got deceived
from the one Who I loved It really hurts and that caused me
a real flop at that time but I've a special characteristic
I think that I'm not the only one who has it but I think
only the real man has these characteristic which is
I love with my heart I take risks but when it come to my Honnor
I 'm against the world.....my matter was just like that
she deceived me so I felt that my Manhood is touched
so I decided to remove that Girl from my maind that took
a real effort but believe me I feel nothing more for that
Girl... But I'm not expecting her
to come back....I'm not begging because if I do that
so I should be a Girl and she would be a Man You get what
I'm saying.......I am not going to revenge because
there is something which is called "bad consequence"
you know the "Moneychasers" she is doing like that....
She is just like a Toy of Luxuries and fake world....I don't blame
her because she is mentally Sick when some one buy himself or
buy herself priceless it's a shame and no one would give a
damn reaction.

she will feel Guilty seriosely
cause she lost a Good person like you

Yeah I expect that for real
But whatever I don't care
but can i ask u something
is the word
"Hate You"
is really From ur heart i mean
you Mean it ??

HHHHHHHHHH
when I said "Hate" I meant another strong bad word
for life but you know it's a shame to say it right here
so I just put the word "hate" and I feel that it doesn't
reveal my real feeling bnecause In another site I said
a real stong bad words hhhhhhh
my simple answer to your answer is:
I only write what I feel I swear so the meaning is too clear
"On gouverne les hommes avec la tèteon ne joue pas aux échecs avec un bon coeur"









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قديم 2011-12-19, 14:06   رقم المشاركة : 4
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افتراضي

Common everybopdy else 27 visiters no comments it's terrible believe me hhhhhhhhhhh....Just a word hey common don't be lazy It's for you evcruy body right here no one special commonnnnnnnnnnn










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قديم 2011-12-19, 14:53   رقم المشاركة : 5
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
I'm not suffering
My heart is normal
My words are telling the truth
Yes Put this words Wrotten with a pain
Didn't it
?

اقتباس:
I am just acting like a real man
I really believe in Love I love the one who I decide to
love but believe me when I feel that I got deceived
from the one Who I loved It really hurts and that caused me
Don't Try To Tell me more Cause i know Exactly
what's this feeling cause i'm just trought it

اقتباس:
a real flop at that time but I've a special characteristic
I think that I'm not the only one who has it but I think
only the real man has these characteristic which is
I love with my heart I take risks but when it come to my Honnor
I 'm against the world.....my matter was just like that

Yeah now i see
it's normally i think ur not the only one who has this
characteristic
cause when u love someone u love him/her with a honor
i can get it
and whatever happening keep ur honor up of everything


اقتباس:
she deceived me so I felt that my Manhood is touched
so I decided to remove that Girl from my maind that took
a real effort but believe me I feel nothing more for that
Girl... But I'm not expecting her
to come back....I'm not begging because if I do that
so I should be a Girl and she would be a Man You get what
I'm saying.......I am not going to revenge because
there is something which is called "bad consequence

you're alright i really saw some people
and after it i said like they are mad or crazy or something
like that like they haven't even a heart
they acting like a toys making themselves toys to their lovers "as they say...!!"and
i don't know the reasons yet of course they keep on saying it's "Love" but i don't know that love
make you a toy to who you love !!!
i mean it's an insane matter
i mean.....!! this is horrible
Oo

[QUOTE]
Yeah I expect that for real
But whatever I don't care[/QUOTE
]

No u should Care cause here
you're winning more self respecting
!
it's a good matter 4 me

^.^
اقتباس:
HHHHHHHHHH
when I said "Hate" I meant another strong bad word
for life but you know it's a shame to say it right here
so I just put the word "hate" and I feel that it doesn't
reveal my real feeling bnecause In another site I said
a real stong bad words hhhhhhh
my simple answer to your answer is:
I only write what I feel I swear so the meaning is too clear


Omg you're so evil hhhhhh
anyway dnt explain more i guess i know this word
/


Life is like that
Day to you and day On you
we keep making the good things from
the bad things that happend to us

we draw our smile according to the tears steps on our face

This is The LIfe

Just Smile

C'mmon I wanna se ur Smile

^______^









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قديم 2011-12-19, 15:10   رقم المشاركة : 6
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افتراضي

[QUOTE=shin hyun;8281556]

Yes Put this words Wrotten with a pain
Didn't it
?

Don't Try To Tell me more Cause i know Exactly
what's this feeling cause i'm just trought it


Yeah now i see
it's normally i think ur not the only one who has this
characteristic
cause when u love someone u love him/her with a honor
i can get it
and whatever happening keep ur honor up of everything



you're alright i really saw some people
and after it i said like they are mad or crazy or something
like that like they haven't even a heart
they acting like a toys making themselves toys to their lovers "as they say...!!"and
i don't know the reasons yet of course they keep on saying it's "Love" but i don't know that love
make you a toy to who you love !!!
i mean it's an insane matter
i mean.....!! this is horrible
Oo

اقتباس:

Yeah I expect that for real
But whatever I don't care[/QUOTE
]

No u should Care cause here
you're winning more self respecting
!
it's a good matter 4 me

^.^


Omg you're so evil hhhhhh
anyway dnt explain more i guess i know this word
/


Life is like that
Day to you and day On you
we keep making the good things from
the bad things that happend to us

we draw our smile according to the tears steps on our face

This is The LIfe

Just Smile

C'mmon I wanna se ur Smile

^______^
I've nothing to say more than I said because you said what I maent to be said hhhhhhhh
You're the only one who give More and more attention to my poems .....I really consider that I'm going to forget it never ever









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قديم 2011-12-19, 15:22   رقم المشاركة : 7
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
I've nothing to say more than I said because you said what I maent to be said hhhhhhhh
You're the only one who give More and more attention to my poems .....I really consider that I'm going to forget it never ever
i just Love this kind of interst
writing is my life
i went i went literary section
just for that
L a n g u a g es is my Passion
learning more that what i'm going to
this is my dream
/
Yes and the secret is that we have kinda same thinking (ideas) arnt you agree with me
??









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قديم 2011-12-19, 17:03   رقم المشاركة : 8
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افتراضي

i just Love this kind of interst
writing is my life
i went i went literary section
just for that
L a n g u a g es is my Passion
learning more that what i'm going to
this is my dream
Yes and the secret is that we have kinda same thinking (ideas) arnt you agree with me
??


I Do agree with youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu yeah Of course...For literature tooo










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قديم 2011-12-19, 17:04   رقم المشاركة : 9
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
i do agree with youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu yeah of course...for literature tooo
^_^ =)









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قديم 2011-12-19, 17:17   رقم المشاركة : 10
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افتراضي

Hey don't you want to read my last poem "Algeria's mùost wanted"????










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قديم 2011-12-19, 17:31   رقم المشاركة : 11
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افتراضي

Sorry i didnt see it

______

Done

^^










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قديم 2011-12-19, 17:37   رقم المشاركة : 12
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افتراضي

wow what an amazing poem karim...i really adoore it..thank you very much for your hard work










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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ilina 07 مشاهدة المشاركة
wow what an amazing poem karim...i really adoore it..thank you very much for your hard work
Thank you Illina actually i've another one please check it "Algeria's most wanted"









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