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2012-02-03, 17:41
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Dead Soldier (full version)
Ttile: Dead Soldier (full version) By: Karim Cherifi To: Algerians I'm a dead soldier i died on my knees what i did what i got still rehearse who am I a soldier or son of people still young but a black minded at all first who am I, I'm from the clothes I dress superficially a man of war a wall of defense look inside me I'm just like you i've an ability i've heart i've feeling i've a wife i've a family i've friends i've children all of them I'm missing I lived suffering then i became struggling fighting every day force the enemy to pay like the heroes who kick french colonizer away we the sons of the people we are the law so when battle came what we do is to blow we never fear and we have no fear except the GOD the fightHonor , strenght loyalty run in our blood when we enter in we make the enemy chilling waiting for nothing but defeat is the meaning about the flag about the Honor we are existed so i'm a dead soldier and this is how it started Fast to the resemblement we were invited they claimed something should be regulated secret orders from the hight authority Ready to die to get the stability The master chief is comming shouting Every soldier every human being keep listening There would be a battle and we were convene We all kept acting like a machine No words no talks the silent is the master Now the captain is saying words to consider Now where we are going is clear you Memorize Place were enemy as a germs and you Sterilize Victims should be, so just remaind Staying alive could be, open your maind With courage you should be provided By Your arm you will be guided A real combat and nothing fake, and risks it takes Everything is true, buletts are true, Bombs are true Arms are true, death is true a false dam is true You have to Left the fear behind,bring the sense of fight So you are here to make the clear day a dark night It's called the responsability you have a duty Algeria in need of you really The enemy in a hurry Remember First day you came, you owe an accord You've sweared by the name of the god that's a nod All you want is Ambitions as a ridah the point is that Some cowards still continue to offend with no regard The need is your guard hence here is the consequence Ride on them bastards bast and cause the resistence The red flood will be the result, the case is harder They are the target you are the hunter be a hustler Each Regiment on the Van go stright to fight The situation is tight plus the color is the night The folks with you every day hoping safety for you Enemy in front of you, Got the death chasing you Never look back and never let them get your neck Check excpect that the wreck is when you fail Death stack on your nail so on yourself prevail I wish you gained of all tricks you learned, caution Every band stand its position the wood is the ******** There recall exercises you had on the training Few mistakes on the stage make you losing No reverse no retreat compete complete the mission Listen the enemy is messing so the fear is missing The soldier is ready for whatever bast on whoever The enemy watch your eye when you put the trigger An eye of a triger Heart of a nigger a mind of hustler The soldier is ready for whatever bast on whoever So when We are passing by it's better to show us love We know the death is around and we're not afraid of If it comes it will be welcome its our duty that we perform We are the masters and in the battle we confirm When we die people See what we did and we had So call Us a martyrs algeria need us to guard Now the soldiers are ready steady to face the enemy panic zone we lead foes to the death destiny I'm a dead soldier I'm heavy they can't carry me As the battle begun my friend is my gun We had a plan that the success should be done The danger we ban but first we've to scan Everything is real against mobs in the jungle Cause them to fall resistance still recycle The soldiers comming to battle it is a real trouble No law in battle the arm is the liable From mercy we're unraveled From families we traveled So we make them foes graveled We never recognize nothing else in the wood we are the influence Every one gained a real experience We bomb first Algeria in my chest Moving to the Right movinf to the left Seraching for our guests the death was felt When we fight the level is high In the dark night suffering from the cold bite Under the moon light foes under the sight Waiting for the right moment to cause a plight The law of Battle say any thing move should be shot Or it would his turn and and we got much shots Walking on the death earth hoping it was not a plot Swearing making their ages so short Full of rage they deserve the death cage By our lives we did gage Now time for hard event wild killing Everybody is running the danger is comming The storm we were facing Bombs , ballets and shouting Throught the grass we were creeping Death beast were kidnapping Blessing were falling Only a few rest in Go save those life leaving God bless those sons God bless Those soldiers God bless those sons of people God bless them brothers God bless Our coutry God Bless every body
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2012-02-11, 19:04
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Yes Thank you my best of the best hhh you know what I don't care for any punk right here so damn to them |
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2012-03-26, 11:28
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اقتباس:
a cup of water no no a bottle of water I need
wait I need a breath what is this brother Karim I was eating the words to reach the end,,,,I wished to be the writer instead of being the reader do you know why coz the writer writes what it comes to his mind"express, express and express ,there is neither full stop nor commas whereas the reader' is going to read all the details to understand what the writer wanted to express and the big problem that when he meets a long poems such your's brother Karim it is so long one and I felt tired but,Elhamd lilah I finished reading it now don't worry I'm not the kind of persons who enjoy discourage others but rather I would say Congracts really a sweet poem eventhough it was long but this dosn't impair my desire to read it it describes how sons of people fight the enemy,it's their duty towards their country i just wonder is it a kind of exprience!!!I know that you're not dead but i felt that it's a true one I don't know may be because your description lead me to conclude that any way,really I congratulate you it's a good one best of wishes |
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2012-06-07, 19:47
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hi, i didn't read all over the poem .. it's too long |
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2012-06-07, 19:49
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hi, i didn't read all over the poem .. it's too long |
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2012-06-07, 21:40
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I will reply by my next poem ...than you |
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