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Don't Cry

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قديم 2013-02-12, 19:25   رقم المشاركة : 1
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Jimmy The Rap Soldie
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آخر تعديل Jimmy The Rap Soldie 2013-06-21 في 20:02.
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قديم 2013-02-12, 20:05   رقم المشاركة : 2
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Black_Poison
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OMG
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
This can't be the end brother....this can't be the end
Remember once we said it can never be late.... it can never be
not you....not my brother
this can't be your destiny
remember when we said we're taking that last chance
you said you'll try to find the way back home
forgive me my
how could i leave you drowning in your pain

sorry brother......you can lose hope on yourself but i can never lose hope on you
i know now what the wise black man siad
i know....:'( i saw it ....:'(
he won't take you anywhere
you're staying here
where you belong
to your family
i won't give up on you
till my last breath
till my last heavy breath
:'(










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قديم 2013-02-13, 16:14   رقم المشاركة : 3
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Jimmy The Rap Soldie
عضو مميّز
 
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
OMG
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
This can't be the end brother....this can't be the end
Remember once we said it can never be late.... it can never be
not you....not my brother
this can't be your destiny
remember when we said we're taking that last chance
you said you'll try to find the way back home
forgive me my
how could i leave you drowning in your pain

sorry brother......you can lose hope on yourself but i can never lose hope on you
i know now what the wise black man siad
i know....:'( i saw it ....:'(
he won't take you anywhere
you're staying here
where you belong
to your family
i won't give up on you
till my last breath
till my last heavy breath
:'(
yes dearest rose :'( ... it ain't the end .. it sure isn't ... yes dearest rose we said it can never be too late even within a last breath we'll fight ... and i'm not losing hope darling ... i promised :'( and i'm up to my promise ^^ :'( u won't give up ... i won't give up either :'(
^^
cheer up rose
^^










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قديم 2013-02-12, 21:08   رقم المشاركة : 4
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Black_Poison
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افتراضي

Don't cry
.............
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(










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قديم 2013-02-13, 16:17   رقم المشاركة : 5
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Jimmy The Rap Soldie
عضو مميّز
 
الصورة الرمزية Jimmy The Rap Soldie
 

 

 
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
Don't cry
.............
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
don't you
cry
:'(
:'(
:'(









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قديم 2013-02-13, 16:26   رقم المشاركة : 6
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Black_Poison
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الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
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المرتبة الثانية 
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jimmy The Rap Soldie مشاهدة المشاركة
don't you
cry
:'(
:'(
:'(

I won't .....as long as i know you
i won't ....as long as you are here.......i won't
:'(
:'(
:'(
I told you the same that day....don't cry you too
or else
:'(









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قديم 2013-02-13, 16:28   رقم المشاركة : 7
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Jimmy The Rap Soldie
عضو مميّز
 
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
I won't .....as long as i know you
i won't ....as long as you are here.......i won't
:'(
:'(
:'(
I told you the same that day....don't cry you too
or else
:'(
i'm really shaking in the presence of such an angelic rose as u r
:'(









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قديم 2013-02-13, 16:32   رقم المشاركة : 8
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Black_Poison
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jimmy The Rap Soldie مشاهدة المشاركة
i'm really shaking in the presence of such an angelic rose as u r
:'(

I'm just your mirror brother.....i'm the mirror that stands behind you
just turn around ....and see what you really are
i'm holding the light for the darkest days...just like you told me
just like you always do









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قديم 2013-02-13, 11:00   رقم المشاركة : 9
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Karim-Rap-4-Life
مشرف سابق
 
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العضو المميز لسنة 2013 وسام التميز في منتدى الإنجليزية المرتبة الثالثة 
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افتراضي

Salam...soul-twin
I won't say this is the best one you have done through your career as
a good rapper ...I won't say this poem is full of similes and figurative speech
But I want to say that this is so disappointing
to
sister "Black poison" and,
Sister "Miss cool" and
me...,
so disappointing Brother
I would like to inform you and for the first time...look I've been suffering in my life too sometimes give up but sometimes I hold my flag high and say I won't stop right here I won't stop right here
hey you miss Gloom you want to take me away I won't go with you I'm staying Strong Miss Gloom
I know miss Gloom is always in my room
but I behave like it's not home

look


talking about that matter n your last lines

I've been through it and I'm through t these days too and still don't know what to do but I'm trying to face it whatever the consequence is
yanawwarameen!!!!


talking about death knocking the door of ya neighbors and feeling it around you everywhere that's exactly what i felt when you all have been away and don't know about it well I chose to keep it secret. and no body knew about it I did not tell you all that I've a huge number of problems but I never gave up coz I am a Man and I'm sure I'll over it by what by the reflexive psychology
like when I feel sad I stand and say at first
no I'm not sad I'm happy
then say it again then again and again
and if I were alone I would scream
and say
I'm happy for reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal
this is how we do Nigger
This is the life of a Rapper
This how we supposed to be
look do it and let it to destiny

I trust a saying that claims
The writer or the poet are one of the most miserable people

I'm sure about t beginning with myself firstly

but what!!! is that my destiny all the time sad no but

the reality is how act now


Djamel you're strong and I'm sure you will get out of the negative circle you're in it!

at least if it's true that you want to go with death live your final days as happy as you can coz the good die is young and the bad one is old
me myself I know that I will die in a very young age I trust it
but I'm happy and I'm strong enough that miss gloom
want to ovecome me.


Peace Nigga
Be the Nigga With Attitude
N.W.A











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قديم 2013-02-13, 16:23   رقم المشاركة : 10
معلومات العضو
Jimmy The Rap Soldie
عضو مميّز
 
الصورة الرمزية Jimmy The Rap Soldie
 

 

 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life مشاهدة المشاركة
Salam...soul-twin
I won't say this is the best one you have done through your career as
a good rapper ...I won't say this poem is full of similes and figurative speech
But I want to say that this is so disappointing
to
sister "Black poison" and,
Sister "Miss cool" and
me...,
so disappointing Brother
I would like to inform you and for the first time...look I've been suffering in my life too sometimes give up but sometimes I hold my flag high and say I won't stop right here I won't stop right here
hey you miss Gloom you want to take me away I won't go with you I'm staying Strong Miss Gloom
I know miss Gloom is always in my room
but I behave like it's not home

look


talking about that matter n your last lines

I've been through it and I'm through t these days too and still don't know what to do but I'm trying to face it whatever the consequence is
yanawwarameen!!!!


talking about death knocking the door of ya neighbors and feeling it around you everywhere that's exactly what i felt when you all have been away and don't know about it well I chose to keep it secret. and no body knew about it I did not tell you all that I've a huge number of problems but I never gave up coz I am a Man and I'm sure I'll over it by what by the reflexive psychology
like when I feel sad I stand and say at first
no I'm not sad I'm happy
then say it again then again and again
and if I were alone I would scream
and say
I'm happy for reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal
this is how we do Nigger
This is the life of a Rapper
This how we supposed to be
look do it and let it to destiny

I trust a saying that claims
The writer or the poet are one of the most miserable people

I'm sure about t beginning with myself firstly

but what!!! is that my destiny all the time sad no but

the reality is how act now


Djamel you're strong and I'm sure you will get out of the negative circle you're in it!

at least if it's true that you want to go with death live your final days as happy as you can coz the good die is young and the bad one is old
me myself I know that I will die in a very young age I trust it
but I'm happy and I'm strong enough that miss gloom
want to ovecome me.


Peace Nigga
Be the Nigga With Attitude
N.W.A



you know what soul-mate? :'( ... i won't say anything it's ok
i'll juts make sure i won't disappoint you guys any more
and sorry guys for every time you cried sorry for the disappointment










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قديم 2013-02-13, 16:28   رقم المشاركة : 11
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Black_Poison
عضو محترف
 
الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
الأوسمة
المرتبة الثانية 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jimmy The Rap Soldie مشاهدة المشاركة
you know what soul-mate? :'( ... i won't say anything it's ok
i'll juts make sure i won't disappoint you guys any more
and sorry guys for every time you cried sorry for the disappointment

No jim.....what do you say
you never disappointed us
what makes you think so









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قديم 2013-02-13, 16:37   رقم المشاركة : 12
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Jimmy The Rap Soldie
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
No jim.....what do you say
you never disappointed us
what makes you think so

it's ok never mind rose
:'(^^










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قديم 2013-02-13, 20:11   رقم المشاركة : 13
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Bouchra mimi
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افتراضي

HeY Jimmy, how're you

I hope you're doing well

I really don't know what to say actually

Can't you notice ...... Can't you see .... you have a great , amazing familly

there ....... you can not let them and leave with just that way

You can't give .... up ...... because that what life want you to do

you need to do what karim said .....Say i'm HAPPY loudly

smile everyday ....

Allah bless you jim










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قديم 2013-02-14, 20:57   رقم المشاركة : 14
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Jimmy The Rap Soldie
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الصورة الرمزية Jimmy The Rap Soldie
 

 

 
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Bouchra mimi مشاهدة المشاركة
HeY Jimmy, how're you

I hope you're doing well

I really don't know what to say actually

Can't you notice ...... Can't you see .... you have a great , amazing familly

there ....... you can not let them and leave with just that way

You can't give .... up ...... because that what life want you to do

you need to do what karim said .....Say i'm HAPPY loudly

smile everyday ....

Allah bless you jim

hi darling
how r u doing
wish u ok
^^
and yeah i can notice
i can see
whjat graet angels i'm sorounded with










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قديم 2013-02-13, 13:16   رقم المشاركة : 15
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Black_Poison
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افتراضي

He's NOT giving up
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(










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