my first poem

[maroua16.58]

this life is like water
it is so easy like melt of butter
it's so beautiful like cuddle of your father
it's so ,shy like hand of your mather
if you live it with hope you feel like that you shine
you feel like a king and you have a crown
sometimes you sad and sometimes you fun
sometimes you feel better and sometimes you run
but this is the life let's live it with smie like line of the sun

[No Love]

Enjoy today while you can .... Because tomorrow is a shotgun

anyway i found it so cute

[maroua16.58]

...........................thank's................ ..................

[saim_n]

thanks u

recette

[saber noui]

nice words

[karoum 65]

thank you very much

[achraf kabouche]

that's sooo gooood

[THE HD22]

good job, very nice poem

[david 12]

i admire it lot

[asmaja]

very nice poam with a good subject keep on

[رحيق العفة]

that'ss perfeeeeccccccccttttttt honeyy

[Houda 92]

,hello

there is some mistakes in grammar, but as a beginner it's awesome

I love it

...keep going

[redouan20102]

ur poem is so sweet but i'de like to correct those mistakes :
sometimes you sad and sometimes you fun
it should be :
sometimes you are sad and sometimes you are fun
thank you anyway

[ابتسام مراكشي]

it's nice thank you

[toulay]

nice
thank you