محتاجة لرايكم جميعاااااااا....

[owl city]

مرحبااا اصدقائي لقد طلبت منا استاذة الانجليزية وضع شعر قصير عن اي موضوع فاخترت انا ان اضع شعرااا عن امي و هدا هو شعري بقلمي الخاص فقولوا لي رايكم بصراحة و حبذاا لو تقولون لي ارائكم بادقق التفاصيل تفضلوا و انتقدوا و امدحوا ههه=
Dear mom
you're my shiny sun every day
I feel sad every second you're away
you're like a moon in a dark night
knows what is wrong and what is right
mom you're a wonderful flower
and you will stay like that for ever
I love you so much mother
you are always so awesome
and nice my lovely personne

تقبلوا تحياتي اختكم ***امينة****

[owl city]

اين انتممممممم........................

[owl city]

اصدقاااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااائي.. ....

[honey swifter]

رائئئع أمينة
الله يبارك
بارك الله في قدراتك حبيبتي

[owl city]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة honey swifter

رائئئع أمينة
الله يبارك
بارك الله في قدراتك حبيبتي

انا جد مسرورة انه اعجبك و بارك فيك الرحمااان و شكراااا على مرورك المعطر نورتي الصفحة لينة غاليتي
في انتظار اراااء الاخرين و مدحهم و انتقاداتهم.......

[مريم المتفائلة]

الاخت امينة والله في قمة الروعة لا ينقصه شيء

[owl city]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة nasira12

الاخت امينة والله في قمة الروعة لا ينقصه شيء

شكرااااا حبيبتي حشمتيني هههههه نورتي الصفحة بمرووورك .....

[M3sRine]

its verry nice and perfect poem

[owl city]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة M3sRine

its verry nice and perfect poem

thank you so much I'm soooooo glad that you like it .......

[سلمىسلمى]

what you have write is good
i liked it
but there is a little mistake

know what's wrong and what's right....♥

[owl city]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة سلمىسلمى

what you have write is good
i liked it
but there is a little mistake

know what's wrong and what's right....♥

اولااا شكرااا على مرورك لكن انت لي راكي غالطة
knows I mean THE MOON ** IT **we must make the S
اوك حبيبتي سلمى

[سلمىسلمى]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة owl city

اولااا شكرااا على مرورك لكن انت لي راكي غالطة
knows I mean THE MOON ** IT **we must make the S
اوك حبيبتي سلمى

hhhh
you didn't understand me
i'm not talking about know
because the s is a big mistake
i'm talking about
rong ---wrong
have u understand
and don't forget
that i know English too much
and i can't make mistake like that
i mean the s
because something happen
to me which makes me don't forget the
s
hhhh

[owl city]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة سلمىسلمى

hhhh
you didn't understand me
i'm not talking about know
because the s is a big mistake
i'm talking about
rong ---wrong
have u understand
and don't forget
that i know English too much
and i can't make mistake like that
i mean the s
because something happen
to me which makes me don't forget the
s
hhhh

okey thank you soooo much i understand but don't be so salfish and snob me too i now english maybe better than you okey dear and all the people make mistakes by the way you musn't say happen ...you should say happened because it's in the past ***the girl who don't ***make mistakes hhhhhhhhhhh

[سلمىسلمى]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة owl city

okey thank you soooo much i understand but don't be so salfish and snob me too i now english maybe better than you okey dear and all the people make mistakes by the way you musn't say happen ...you should say happened because it's in the past ***the girl who don't ***make mistakes hhhhhhhhhhh

I'm not proud of myself or something like that
And I think I set the thing that does not sin against the
And is the "s"
And you can not know English like me dear
This is impossible
As for my fault it was a mistake in writing
And I do not think it's good to mock
I hope understanding
and who u know English better than me "even that is impossible"
u made many mistakes in your reply

i now english maybe better than you okey

the correction is
I know English maybe better than you okay
and the big mistake is
that
you don't know English better than me okay
hhhh
bye

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