man in dust......by me

[spy4me]

Man in dust by spy4me

He hardly could walk to his wooden chair and sat, he looked around the place and released a deep breath, then took out his glasses from the upper left pocket of his shirt and started reading a newspaper written in French, and sometimes he smiled sarcastically putting his shaky forefinger upon a headline in the political page.
Mister Ahmed, “the heart of lion”, that was the name he was famous with among his friends during the revolution war. An old man with shining intellect and perky sense of humour, the wrinkles on his front hide a lot of memories.
He held his body into a big picture on the wall and stared at it for a while and then, he took out a red handkerchief and wiped away his tears. His wife was the apple of his eyes, the only one who stood by him and was his she.lter in the hard times, she died of cancer few years ago, Ahmed still remember his promise to her, to take care of the little boy Ali, an orphan used to serve the couple . Along this period, Ali learned how to live in that social turmoil and all those contradictions of life. Uncle Ahmed liked to hear the voice of Ali reading some books for him, at the end he says “god bless you son”. Uncle Ahmed has only one son living in France and rarely could talk to him.
One day he called Ali and asked him to sit by his side: “you know son, the life is no longer than it used to be, everything has changed, even people themselves, we were a community, one mass living in love and harmony, if someone absents, all we feel the gap and ask about them, we used to share the happy moments as the same the sad ones, we complain to each other, we give helping hand to people in need, all give charity even the poor, we did not know the meaning of cheating ,embezzlement or nepotism, all we were the same with simple and traditional way of life but that defined us, we, with our own true identity, we ate what we planted, wore what we sewed and we never thought to give up this fact or to change it, and if you asked someone of us, he’d say ‘I have the world’. And now son, you can go outside and see what the change means for people; is to leave their identity in the name of development, so pathetic son! “
.....................the end...................

hoping you like it and waiting your replies

[taha madani]

thanks bro i really like it keep on

[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة taha madani

thanks bro i really like it keep on

thanks man you're the best

[sarouna22]

what can i say of course it is

[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sarouna22

what can i say of course it is

thanks for reading

[اناناسة]

Hi again ! thanks spy4you ... talking about the meaning .. i see you like transmiting messages through your writings .. ...your picture in my imagination grows clearer and clearer ... i enjoy reading the things you write ... i encouarge you cause there are few students taking things as serious as you do ... i guess English has become your world now ... keep going and always remember sis zineb is always looking forward to read your new topics

[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة zinebsiradj

Hi again ! thanks spy4you ... talking about the meaning .. i see you like transmiting messages through your writings .. ...your picture in my imagination grows clearer and clearer ... i enjoy reading the things you write ... i encouarge you cause there are few students taking things as serious as you do ... i guess English has become your world now ... keep going and always remember sis zineb is always looking forward to read your new topics

hi, well, i think the writing work has no point if it does not have messages and morals, i intend to convey them through simple languag.e and always try to lead the reader into a clear image using logical transmission, i like to play the role of the reader so i can control my thoughts correctly
after all i dont consider myself special to write such texts, because i guess all of us have some thoughts that come to mind, but i simply let them go freely through my pen
thank you, your words are really encouraging

[احسان2]

in your little story the old man said : if someone absents, all we feel the gap and ask about them
we say If you are absent there will be no meaning to the English Club
waiting for more from you but i want you to know that am afraid if you write an other story i wont find any word to say it as a reply
god blesses you

[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة احسان2

in your little story the old man said : if someone absents, all we feel the gap and ask about them
we say If you are absent there will be no meaning to the English Club
waiting for more from you but i want you to know that am afraid if you write an other story i wont find any word to say it as a reply
god blesses you

thank you Ihsan, i appreciate your care of reading my writings, actually im nothing here without people like you
Allah bless you as well sister

[imane ha]

what i can say is thankx a lot
allah will prize u

[اسماء32]

you are the best o the best

[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة imane ha

what i can say is thankx a lot
allah will prize u

thank you for reading
allah reward you as well sister

[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة اسماء32

you are the best o the best

thank you, you are the best

[radpeace]

Thanks spy4me for your great efforts to enlighten this club and may Allah bless and reward you in this worldly life as well as in the most glorious one,the hereafter.
I enjoyed reading the story, which reflects the ugly image and unpleasant fact of our nowadays generation. Everyone is living according to his own-selfish- way without giving any care about the people surrounding him, unlike the people of the past, they used to live as a single body , sharing everything they had, and caring for everyone's concerns,interests, and worries.

you're doing well brother ...keep going on, we're waiting for more

saha ramdankom

[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة radpeace

Thanks spy4me for your great efforts to enlighten this club and may Allah bless and reward you in this worldly life as well as in the most glorious one,the hereafter.
I enjoyed reading the story, which reflects the ugly image and unpleasant fact of our nowadays generation. Everyone is living according to his own-selfish- way without giving any care about the people surrounding him, unlike the people of the past, they used to live as a single body , sharing everything they had, and caring for everyone's concerns,interests, and worries.
you're doing well brother ...keep going on, we're waiting for more

saha ramdankom

thank you radpeace your words are very encouraging
im glad you get the gist of the story