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The telephone is very usefull invention,it has many advantages for people .
First,we can call any one in any space and at any time.
Second,the telephone has a lot of particularities like the time and the date,games,take photos,vedios,awakening ,calculator that they help us.
Third,it can aid people specially in the hard problems .
Finally,the telephone is very necessary and favorable,so we must profit to it.