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hello every one on this forum 
it's my first time that i share what i write ..cuz i was scaring frm showin'em
but yr amzing writings made me be brave to show my writings even they're so bad
'cause i know that the essentiel of showing'em is to make'em so good
i'll not be angry of yr correction , so if u find anything wrong just corect me
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and this is one of my writings
hoping it gets ur admiration
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Let me cry ,let some expressions write
Cuz u've deprived me from my life's light
Since u left me , i'm linving in darknesss like the night
Cuz u've limitted all my chances to fight
Haha..i was thinking that i'm yr dreams knight
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You told me[that] u loved me nd u ve lied
Yeah, for our love i'd suicide
I can even deat's vehicule ride
I know it' not love it's a game so dont try to hide
So just tell me ,, why u v made our love died
waiting yr points of view about it
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hiiii bro
h r u
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wish ya doing fine
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i'm not a lair
so believe me when i say ur poem is so beautiful
do u know why
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ok
i'll tell you a secret about writing poems
don't tell any one ok
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hhhh
just kidding
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ok look
it's not about the words you put
it's about the feelings you share
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and the more feelings are honest and strong the more your poem looked pretty amazing
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so don't say your poems are not good
i bet you're a better writer than me
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so do never give up
and you'll always keep getting better
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your bro
jimmy
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