[Katy Pretty girl]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life

Hello saha ramdankom Saha ramdanak Katy this is the best piece you have written it’s so much clear and developed than the previous once rhymes are perfect majority of lines too but some others need to be fixed whatever I like it coz it’s a clear message and positive thinking to be unified for one reason of love and brotherhood during reading it I tried to help you fix something read it again and see the difference and you’re free of course it’s your writing and you’re the responsible

Can you stop the hate, can you walk straight
There's no time to wait, before it will be late

i want to change the world can you help me please
let’s give it a try it's not that hard to be released
The good person inside you about to decrease
The hate, the anger, we want to live in peace
Stop doing bad things, stop saying lies
Recognize that you supposed to be wise

Darkness is harsh should never rise
we can see the light in the child's eyes

Learn how to work together and try to hold
Each other's hands, that gives us a hope

Peaceful hearts that shines like a shiny gold

I’ve been told "Being together is being strong"

forget the bad times, the dark past, find something new
It doesn't matter if we're many or few
with your help I can do it, you knew
That we should get rid of lies and keep everything true
Being a strong, smart, brave, that’s the case’s clue
it's easy as counting from one to two
Read my poem and tell If you agree with me too
we can start from now, it's all up to you
It’s not about killing, scaring then saying sorry
you and I want to write our own story
we all want need to make our own glory
you already know what you have to do so don't worry
you have to be strong so as to build your wall
stop being stupid, this is a wake-up call!!

Keep it up I’m waiting to read your next

wonderful i like it
it's so great
u can put some music in it and make it a song
i realy like it
thanks