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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : I wish i could fly "the best poem of mine"

that's me
2011-08-04, 14:09
butterfly,fly high
go to switzerland
go to shanghai
every known land
loves you little shy
fly quietly,as if you were a spy
fly over seas , fly by the sky
fly up the hill and though the milky way
show brightly,come and stand by
tell me how do you do
after a busy day
I like listning to you
coz you never lie
you laugh and never cry
butterfly , fly away
spray your charm,till you die
you are so free
and that's the reason why
"I wishI was you
I wish I could fly"
ابتساام
2011-08-04, 17:00
it's nice thanks
spy4me
2011-08-04, 17:24
nice one "that's you" a butterfly flies quitely as if it was a spy (like me) lol
thanks
that's me
2011-08-05, 10:32
it's nice thanks
thank u ابتسام:dj_17:
that's me
2011-08-05, 10:51
nice one "that's you" a butterfly flies quitely as if it was a spy (like me) lol
thanks


thnx , I 'll change the poem to be
like this
::19:
(fly quietly , as if you were spy 4me)
I hope it 'll be a good spy just like you
sali05000
2011-08-16, 20:43
u r great.go on.
SSOH95
2011-08-17, 23:48
i love it
keeeeeep up the good work
Hillin
2011-08-18, 11:42
Peace upon you sister,a nice and sweet poem,I read it as if i'm eating a sweet apple"congratulations
I know it's impossible to fly since we're human being but our feelings can fly,do you know the famous song"i'm alive of Celine Dion,by listening to it you feel as you're going to fly.to be honest,if you're not fond of her,it's somehow hard to feel as well as me coz Celine Dion is my favourite singer.
well,thanks again
my best wishes
that's me
2011-08-23, 00:44
u r great.go on.
u are greater thnx:dj_17:
that's me
2011-08-23, 00:45
[QUOTE=SSOH95;7007024]i love it
keeeeeep up the good work[/QUOTE
I will thnx :)]
that's me
2011-08-23, 01:20
Peace upon you sister,a nice and sweet poem,I read it as if i'm eating a sweet apple"congratulations
I know it's impossible to fly since we're human being but our feelings can fly,do you know the famous song"i'm alive of Celine Dion,by listening to it you feel as you're going to fly.to be honest,if you're not fond of her,it's somehow hard to feel as well as me coz Celine Dion is my favourite singer.
well,thanks again
my best wishes
thnx your comment made me fly and about the song I really love that song
you just taught me that there are many ways to fly and that it not impossible
to fly by our own way , you are such a wise :19:girl glad to have you in the forum
thnx alot
honnest smiley
2011-08-26, 15:24
awesome butterfly i mean poem !! :p lol

it's terrific keep it
up hun <3
Hillin
2011-09-01, 20:19
thnx your comment made me fly and about the song I really love that song
you just taught me that there are many ways to fly and that it not impossible
to fly by our own way , you are such a wise :19:girl glad to have you in the forum
thnx alot
Welcome Dear,Thanks for your sweet comment since really it touched me deeply.So;I can say we have the same tendency;I mean both of us love the same song
my best wishes
lynz hardoussa
2011-09-16, 14:19
Amazing poem
Keep goin ^^
براهيم جموعي
2011-09-16, 16:48
nice peom
thank u