Tears

[rock-girl46]

Tears

Tears of blood fall from my broken heart
I never thought we would be apart

When you held me you said "forever"
Now that your gone I know you meant "never"

Saying you love me with that look in your eye
And that was a cold hearted lie

Your tender touch, a soft kiss
Two things about you I will miss

As I sit here thinking about you
My face is wet with tears past due

I should've cried a long time ago
But I loved you so

I know they say love is blind
But I had only you on my mind

A hurt so deep it cuts like a knife
But wounds heal and I'll go on with my life


:mh92::mh92:

[rock-girl46]

dark demons in my dreams turned my laughter into screams what was good now is bad this demons get me mad.
come on dash comments!!!!!!!

[MrDeath]

Verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry Nice
Let's RoCk
☻ ☻ ☻

c qui ki chante ?

[bmlsy]

realy is the heart broken??

[rock-girl46]

Verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry Nice
Let's RoCk
☻ ☻ ☻

c qui ki chante ?


ah no it's not a singer it's my poem

[rock-girl46]

thank's guys
lets rock for real
lol

[MrDeath]

Really It's Your Poem !! Ohhh lalalaa

What The Hell Are You Saying ...
And You're Fly Fly Flying With LIE LIE Lying ...
Where's The Truth, Why You Lying ??

Sad Poem About Love ♥


This Poem Is About The Pain Of a Broken Heart


© Erika ==> Poem's

[bila00b]

Very good ....I think this is the best poem I ever read in this forum ....Bravo

[lynz hardoussa]

good !! keep going girl ..... !!
U rock ^^

[كارهة]

i don't know what to say but i think that it's the real poem that makes the heart bleeds
it's clearly that you're injured from inside

[rock-girl46]

yap i'm injured but not any more

[mimi-leales]

thanks a lot ;Ithink that poem is by far the better meaning for a broken heart

[the fly boy]

this ain't ur poem
lying
??

[وردة مـن ذهـب]

it's very gd sis

I really liked it

keep going

waiting for your new

[سياف 100]

[Ii dont know you but i lovde you from my heart throught your poemI]

[that's me]

great p:Dem carry :)n

[biohay2006]

It looks like a bad injury u had ...i hope u recover from it very soon
really touching poem of yours
keep going
waiting for new one... but this time not about a broken heart but about a happy soul

[starling]

peace be upon you


My friend tears are expressions show inside feeling ...some persons cry because they are deeply hurt so we hope that tears are agood way in recovery

[nounouss]

is it really ur poem
i've doubts abt it.
but nice nd touching words

[rock-girl46]

[Ii dont know you but i lovde you from my heart throught your poemI]
thanksssssssssss

[lovely friend]

may allah bless you sis for your beautiful and honest feelings that you have...thank you for your great topic

[حكاية قلب]

i adoooooooooooore it
lùùùùv it

ur so good
keep going

peace

^^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hey..........I am ipressed by your topic and I'm going to write about a topic of mine just like yours okey just wait for it hhh

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

My words is that this is a great simple poem
I am really impressed by the way you chose words
and expressions I liked the rhymes too because they are
Parralaled I can see that .....The meaning is clear your
message is done and comprehended I'm personally
Feel sad for you because of the same matter of separation
Deceiving is the most word I really hate....I agree withyou
in your poem.

the part that I am admired by is

When you held me you said "forever"
Now that your gone I know you meant "never"

and this part too

As I sit here thinking about you
My face is wet with tears past due


now here I think you might take a look again

I know they say love is blind.........A
But I had only you on my mind.....B

I think A and B has the same meaning so no need to put "But"
and I propose toput "and" instead....it still an opinion ask Miss
"Shin Shyn" to give us a view about it.

[حكاية قلب]

Yes i do agree with u Karim

----------------

Cause if you mean u Love this person
you'll say
I know they say love is blind.........A

and I had only you on my mind.....B


and if you dont let it But
but i think u do

[rock-girl46]

thanks so much about ur corrections and i'll take ur advices in the near future nchallah
thanks

[حكاية قلب]

thanks so much about ur corrections and i'll take ur advices in the near future nchallah
thanks



Never Mind Miss

^.^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

thanks so much about ur corrections and i'll take ur advices in the near future nchallah
thanks

If you I'm mentioned too....You're welcome toooo

[rock-girl46]

thanks both of u

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

hey...I just visited your blog of skyrock but i've a little probleme...my account is need of regulation

[rock-girl46]

hey...I just visited your blog of skyrock but i've a little probleme...my account is need of regulation
ya so what do u think

[حكاية قلب]

hey...I just visited your blog of skyrock but i've a little probleme...my account is need of regulation

yeah me2 and i like it with my fcbk acount
^^
you're gifted girl
i like your EMO Rock style

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

your blog is so amazing Girl I really Liked your articles and I'm going to comment on them just hold on....especially the long article you have published in Juin 20011 I think pffff it was a dman long sotry hhh yeah just keep writing you're talentful

[rock-girl46]

your blog is so amazing Girl I really Liked your articles and I'm going to comment on them just hold on....especially the long article you have published in Juin 20011 I think pffff it was a dman long sotry hhh yeah just keep writing you're talentful
thankssssssssssssssssssssssss

[lilo rok]

http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/pain-of-broken-heart-poem

I really was impressed with the poem, but then I remembered I have seen it before so decided to google it and ...Wahh I was shocked to see that you "Copy & Past" it. I got nothing to say , but try to write on your own & avoid steeling people's work

[thenewibe]

ah no it's not a singer it's my poem

u mad bro ? you obviously didn't write the poem, at least give credits to original writer aka Erika, here's the original one http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/pain-of-broken-heart-poem

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Oh damn I don't Like this type of works please people right here we comment on your poems to share it with you not to ......f*****around oh damn what the hell oh god Miss we need an explanation If you really copied it just tell us so how we will believe your next poems oh damn I

[lilo rok]

Oh damn I don't Like this type of works please people right here we comment on your poems to share it with you not to ......f*****around oh damn what the hell oh god Miss we need an explanation If you really copied it just tell us so how we will believe your next poems oh damn I

:yes bro , she copied it and said she wrote it. if you don't believe me here's the link

http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/pain-of-broken-heart-poem