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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : poem wroten by myself .. Log in and give me your opinion

polina03
2011-02-21, 19:53
many years of my life,
I look in, I see my future look out.
But now, something is different,
Another face looks back,
I see a stranger starring back at me.

My childhood is buried here,
in the shade of my dreams.
I’ve walked this way as a girl and a woman,
And each time as I passed by,
I looked in the window,
My future was there starring back at me.

But now time has passed me by,
this future is not mine,
but I pass by the windows once again.
The face looking out can’t know,
of my now shattered dream,
of being the face looking back at me.

over yours
خولة1995
2011-02-21, 20:11
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spy4me
2011-02-28, 19:57
if you invited your future he'd come without any problem, just kidding :D
i appreciate the poem, nice and cool
thank you
ilina 07
2011-03-01, 13:26
... it's really an amazing poem good job
مراهقة مستكشفة
2011-03-01, 14:34
oh honey you wrote it by yourself honey let me tell you something we are not that stupid as you think we are so you can lie on us this poem is written by Cal Even the title is Dreams in the windows .
liying is not a good thing at all .
spy4me
2011-03-01, 14:44
oh honey you wrote it by yourself honey let me tell you something we are not that stupid as you think we are so you can lie on us this poem is written by Cal Even the title is Dreams in the windows .
liying is not a good thing at all .
really?! OMG if it is right, it's plagiarism
مراهقة مستكشفة
2011-03-01, 20:09
it's that so hard of you to admit you made a mistake look we are not angels you know so it's not that hard to say i am sorry i made a mistake ok .
matheleme
2011-03-02, 18:44
hy friends .. i mean dounia and spy4me.... i've written a poem ( FORTUNATTALY YOU CAME ) read it and give me your opinions .. hearing from tou soon ...by the way ... i'm matheleme .. just kiding i...hhh
BAROUD
2011-03-02, 19:02
... words
ideas ...
imaginations...
=
good realisation



carry-on


baroud
Beautiful Angel
2011-03-06, 17:27
carry-on.......
you can do the best
morbid princess
2011-03-06, 18:16
oh honey you wrote it by yourself honey let me tell you something we are not that stupid as you think we are so you can lie on us this poem is written by Cal Even the title is Dreams in the windows .
liying is not a good thing at all .
sorry but i didnt find this auther and even the poem can u give us the right name pls?