I love her

[bila00b]

Wind is feeling my face
My lips are shaking ..why
My heart is on a love race
I can't tell her a lie
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For her a lie is a black dove
A dove can't see and can't hear
I can't tell her because I'm in love
See me and hear my heart's fear

[amoula m.l.a]

Hey brother..very nice poem..keep writing and be sure that i'll read all your poem...waiting for your news..c u..:19:

[Tsukikaze]

:mh31::mh31::mh31:
Love, I get so lost, sometimes
Days pass and this emptiness fills my heart
When I want to run away
I drive off in my car
But whichever way I choose
I come back to the place you are
And all my instincts, they return
And the grand facade, so soon will burn
Without a noise, without my pride
I reach out from the inside
In your eyes
The light, the heat
I am complete
I see the doorway
to a thousand churches
The resolution of all the fruitless searches
Oh, I see the light and the heat
Yes, I want to be that complete
I want to touch the light
The heat I see in your eyes
Love, I don't like to see so much pain
So much wasted and each moment is slipping away
I get so tired, working so hard for our survival
I look to these times with you, to keep me awake and alive
And all my instincts, they return
And the grand facade, so soon will burn
Without a noise, without my pride
I reach out from the inside
In your eyes
The light and the heat
I am complete
I see the doorway to a thousand churches
And resolution of all the fruitless searches
Oh, I see the light and the heat
Yes, I want to be that complete
I want to touch the light,
The heat I see in your eyes
In your eyes
In your eyes

:19::19::19:

[mocho]

its nice thank you very much

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[fridy8]

Keep going on...0

[lizzi]

very nice keep going

[عاشقة الصداقة]

keeeeeep going very nice poem

[مارس]

go on.............................

[ghalias]

nice works guys.... keep it on

[bila00b]

I will keep going on just for you all

[Mr.lookingfortrouble]

guys, u should take into consideration
The most common meter in English poetry, the so-called iambic pentameter, ..... when needed after taking in consideration the poetic rules of the last word
POETRY, like humour, loses something when you attempt to explain it. Form and ******* are umbilically attached. Great poets turn instinctively to the form that will help them express best what they want to say. From the reader's point of view, however, the explanations can have the effect of making poetry seem as complicated as the internal combustion engine.

[lilo rok]

Omg i realy like it....great words tpuhing the soul
i wish all the best for u bro
peace + take care

[bila00b]

thank you very much

[selma999]

so romantic

[Fairy_Rina]

wow , realy it was very touching , u r the Legend nd dont say no
God bless u bro

[bila00b]

Well Thank you very much for your support

[Darkness angel]

hiiiiiiiiiiiiii guys
how r u i missed u all BILA;AMOULA; TSUKIKA :mh31:
ND I LIKE THe WORD'S

[bila00b]

we missed u too

[كارهة]

tell her that u love her and im sure that she will kiss u

[bila00b]

Thank you ..I already told her and I got my ....

[spy4me]

how pathetic this generation !! living in a dreamy world
wake up!!

[bila00b]

Love is not a dream ..It's reality ...a reality that can be seen by only who tryed it


Forgive me but you are wrong

[lynz hardoussa]

wow i don't know what to say cuz you can see that it influanced all the members ^^
the only thing i can say now .. i hope the moment you'r waiting for comes soon i'm not expecting a happy ending of fairytails but
hope you both find Ur way ^^