صفحة خاصة بالإنجليزية

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة akbi

thank you very much sir

The story is very nice though it is scaring but there are some mistakes like

After this day

It's better to say : Since that day

Some said

It's better to say: Some people said

The monster killed them

We say : The monster had killed them

Others said that he transformed them

We say: he had transformed them

That's all

Thank you

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

السلام عليكم

ارجوا التصحيح بارك الله فيكم

بالنسبة للفقرة فاسعود لاحقا ان شاء الله

Yes,everything is right.Well done

Waiting for your paragraph

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

yes,everything is right.well done

waiting for your paragraph

ook


thank you teacher

[akbi]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

The story is very nice though it is scaring but there are some mistakes like

After this day

It's better to say : Since that day

Some said

It's better to say: Some people said

The monster killed them

We say : The monster had killed them

Others said that he transformed them

We say: he had transformed them

That's all

Thank you

mille merci Mr pour votre correction

[~نسآئم الصبآح ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300

good afternoon sir
how are u

we miss your subjects and activities

this is a situation of integgeration about the pollution and what we should do to avoide this problem

ihope that you will see it and correct it

Nowadays .the nature suffer from many diseases and the main illness is the pollution
the origine of this problem is the men who neglect the nature and think just of his owen business

this problem kills the animals and destroy anything green and causes a lot of disease to the men
and make the world in a big trouble

to avoide this problem first of all we must be concious person then we must clean our envirement
second thing we must plant trees because ih is so important because it gives us the oxygen
in audition we should re use botteles plastics and glasses moreover we must set a strict rules to cure the pollution

in conclusion .we must clean our nature because clean nature means a concious person

i hope that i didn't make a lot of mistakes
and plz sir dont forget my question about letter

this is my paragraph
plz sir correct it

[abir2000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

Text
Amine is a teacher at middle school.He told his pupils how school used to be when he was young.This is what he said : « Years ago,school didn’t use to be the same as it is now.At primary school,we used to study Arabic and French.In Arabic,we used to study the Arabic l.a.n.g.u.a.g.e,Mathematics and the Islamic education.At middle school,we used to study many other subjects like English,Biology,Physics,Art and others.
Pupils didn’t use to be as noisy as the pupils of today.They used to do their home work regularly and respect their teachers.Most of the pupils used to be good.
Parents also used to control their children at home and at school.That’s how school used to be not like the school of today. »

Part one :
Reading Comprehension Activity one : Read the text and choose the best title.
a) How School Should Be
b) How School Will Be
c) How School Used to Be
Activity two : Say if it is true , false or not mentiond
1-Shcool, in the past, used to be the same as it is now
2-Amine used to like English very much.
3-Pupils,in the past,used to respect their teachers
Activity three : Answer the questions according to the text.
1-Did Amine use to study English at the primary school ?
2-What did pupils use to do regularly ?
3-Did parents use to control their children ?
Mastery of ********
Activity one : Give the right form of the verbs.
1- Amine ( to use to go ) to school by bus.
2-He ( not to use to eat ) at the school canteen.
3- He misses his schoolmates very much.If he has time,he ( to visit ) them next week.
Activity two : Combine the two clauses with a relative pronoun who or which.
1- I haven’t yet read the book. You gave me the book yesterday.
2- We can’t help the pupils.The pupils don’t help themselves.
Activity three :Find in the text four words that contain the diphthongs

au/ cow / ei / play/



Part two :
Written Expression : Primary school is not like middle school. Try to remember when you were a pupil at the primary school and in short paragraph,tell us about :
- the subjects which you used to study
- the teachers who used to teach you
- the uniform that you used to wear
-the time you used to spend at school
- how you used to go to school

my answers :
1) the best title is : how school used to be
2) i say true or false :
- ( school, in past , used to be the same as its now ( false
- ( Amine used to like English very much ( not mentioned
- ( pupils in the past used to respect their teachers ( true
3) i answer the questions :
- no , he did n't used to
- they used ti do their home work regulary
- yes , they did
mastery of ******** :
1) i give the right form of the verbs :
- Amine used to go to school by bus
- he misses his schoolmates very much if he has time he will visit them next week
- he did n't use to eat at school canteen
2) i combine the two clauses :
- i have n't yet read the book which you give me yesturday
- we can't help the pupils who don't help themselves
3) i pick up from the text four words has the same diphtongs :
au/ = how , now/
ei/ = today , they/
written experssion :
One be upon a day , when i was a child , i used to go to the nearest school from our home , i used to learn Arabic , French , Mathematics ,and Islamic and other subjects . I remember well my teachers the Arabic one called Zineb and the French one named Kamla , i used to wear many clothes , but my pinifore was pink , i used to spend 7 hours at school from 8 o'clock till 4 o'clock . It was realy fantastic days , i can't forget it along my life .

[~نسآئم الصبآح ~]

good morning sir
this is my answer
act 1 *
what school used to be
act 2 *
1false
2not mentioned
3true
*
act 3
1 no he didn't
2 the pupils used to do their home work regulary
3 yes they did
act 4

amine used to go to school by bus

-He didn't use to eat at the school canteen

He misses his schoolmates very much.If he has time,hewill visit them next week

act 5

I haven’t yet read the book which You gave me yesterday

We can’t help the pupils.who don’t help themselves

act 6
/au/
how - now
/ei/
they- today

written expression

there are many moments in my life which i cant forget them at all like my days in primary school

I used to go to dif lamourri school the nearest school to my home.I used to study many subjects
such as math . arabic .french . historic and geo islamic and other subjects . My favourite subject was math
because i liked it so much and i was usally get 10 . My teacher o f arabic was said and of french was kouissi
i used to wear pink pinafore . and i used to spend about 5 hours per day.

In conclusion . this days was the most important in my life when i start create my personality and i invested all
my enrgies .

plz sir correct my corrections
sorry i didn't ponctuate my correction

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300

good afternoon sir
how are u

we miss your subjects and activities

this is a situation of integgeration about the pollution and what we should do to avoide this problem

ihope that you will see it and correct it

peace be upon you

Nowadays , the nature suffers from many diseases(why diseases,I think it's inappropriate) and the main illness is the (say directly pollution)pollution
the origin of this problem is the men who neglect the nature ,and think just of his own business

this problem kills the (the same remark why the say directly animals)animals ,and(here omit and because you are going to add another idea) destroys anything(normally,everything is better) green ,and (the same remark put only a comma not and)causes a lot of diseases to the men(I prefer to people
and makes the world in a big trouble ,

to avoid this problem first of all we must be conscious persons then we must clean our environment.
second thing, we must plant trees because they are so important because (to avoid repetition ,it's better to write since) they give us the (again,why the say directly oxygen) oxygen
in addition,we should re use plastic bottles ,and glasses. Moreover,we must set a(pay attention,you said rules not rule why the article a) strict rules to cure(it's better to say get rid of) the (no need for the)pollution

as a conclusion .we must clean our nature because clean nature means a conscious person or you can say mind

i hope that i didn't make a lot of mistakes
and plz sir dont forget my question about letter

as an advice,try to be brief and concise to avoid mistakes
best of luck

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300

this is my paragraph
plz sir correct it

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300 مشاهدة المشاركة
good afternoon sir
how are u

we miss your subjects and activities

this is a situation of integgeration about the pollution and what we should do to avoide this problem

ihope that you will see it and correct it

Nowadays , nature suffers from many problems and the main one is pollution
the origine of this problem is man who neglects nature and thinks just of his own business

this problem kills the animals and destroys anything green , causes a lot of diseases to man
and puts the world in a big trouble

to avoid this problem, first of all we must be concious and we must clean our environment
Secondly, we must plant trees because it is so important since they give us oxygen
in addition ,we should reuse plastic and glasses. Moreover we must set strict rules to fight pollution

In conclusion .we must clean our nature because clean nature means aware people

i hope that i didn't make a lot of mistakes
and plz sir dont forget my question about letter

Your paragraph is better now

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة abir2000

my answers :
1) the best title is : how school used to be
2) i say true or false :
- ( school, in past , used to be the same as its now ( false
- ( Amine used to like English very much ( not mentioned
- ( pupils in the past used to respect their teachers ( true
3) i answer the questions :
- no , he did n't
- they used ti do their home work regulary
- yes , they did
mastery of ******** :
1) i give the right form of the verbs :
- Amine used to go to school by bus
- he misses his schoolmates very much if he has time he will visit them next week
- he did n't use to eat at school canteen
2) i combine the two clauses :
- i have n't yet read the book which you give me yesturday
- we can't help the pupils who don't help themselves
3) i pick up from the text four words has the same diphtongs :
au/ = how , now/
ei/ = today , they/
written experssion :
, when i was a child , i used to go to the nearest school to our home , i used to learn Arabic , French , Mathematics , Islamic education and other subjects . I remember well my teachers the teacher of Arabic was called Zineb and the French one was named Kamla , i used to wear many clothes , but my pinifore was pink , i used to spend 7 hours at school from 8 o'clock till 4 o'clock . It was realy fantastic time , i can't forget it along my life .

It was corrected

The personal pronoun " I " is always capitalized

[lynamoi]

اللله يسلمك

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300

good morning sir
this is my answer
act 1 *
what school used to be
act 2 *
1false
2not mentioned
3true
*
act 3
1 no he didn't
2 the pupils used to do their home work regulary
3 yes they did
act 4

amine used to go to school by bus

-He didn't use to eat at the school canteen

He misses his schoolmates very much.If he has time,hewill visit them next week

act 5

I haven’t yet read the book which You gave me yesterday

We can’t help the pupils.who don’t help themselves

act 6
/au/
how - now
/ei/
they- today

written expression

there are many moments in my life which i cant forget at all like my days at primary school

I used to go to dif lamourri school the nearest school to my home.I used to study many subjects
such as maths . Arabic .French . historic and geo Islamic educationand other subjects . My favourite subject was maths
because i liked it so much and i was good at it . My teacher o f Arabic was said and the one of French was kouissi
i used to wear a pink pinafore and i used to spend about 5 hours per day.

In conclusion . those days were the most important in my life when i started building my personality and i invested all
my energy in .

plz sir correct my corrections
sorry i didn't ponctuate my correction

Your production is very good.I've corrected your mistakes,just mind them

[~نسآئم الصبآح ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

Your production is very good.I've corrected your mistakes,just mind them

thank you sir so much

[الجوهرة الرمادية]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الجوهرة الرمادية

their are a lot means of transport but i prefer the plane because it is comfortable and very conviniant for me specially i like so much birds in the sky
the plane is very expensive ....it help you to drowing in another world between the clouds
the hosts of plane are very nice ..they work sincerly and regularity ....
and
for these reason i love traval buy plane
..

..

هذه اجابتي على وضعية شهادة التعليم المتوسط 2008

ارجوا ان تحصححها لي استاذي ( اذا كان لي هناك مانع ان تضع لي العلامة من فضلك)

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الجوهرة الرمادية

hi silina...
thank you for your last letter .. i hope to be fine
-my last holiday was on djijle i traveled there with my sister at the farm of my grand parent
the farm was very big and beautiful . we founed the comfort there ... the pure air and a warm sun
-we help our grand parents on the farm and at home because they can not do all
Businesses
we stayed there during two weeks ..
i liked these holiday and i hope to return there with my family

yours mano


اتمنى ان تصححها لي استاذة

هي اجابتي على الجزء الثاني من امتحان شهادة التعليم المتوسط

2011

ارجوا ان تضع لي العلامة ان امكن

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الجوهرة الرمادية

hi nesrine...
thank you for your last letter..i am very happy for this news
i hope to come with your sister lina....
i will visit with you to many places in contantin like gantrate lhbal ..djbal alwahche ..islamic university and mosque amir abdlkabar....
i 'm sure that you will lik it spicially we will meet my friends sounia and marwa and you will take many photoes with us
waiting for you
yours.......

اتمنى التصحيح من فضلكم ..
هي اجابتي على part 2 bem 2010
تعبيري ممل و لكن من فضلك ضع لي العلامة المناسبة حتى اعرف مستواي و شكرا

teacher pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[ath111]

there are a lot means of transport but i prefer the plane because it is comfortable and very conviniant for me
the plane is very expensive .It draws you into another world between the clouds
the hostesses of the plane are very nice .They work sincerly and regularly ....
and
for these reasons, i love to traval by plane
.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...


hi silina...
thank you for your last letter .. i hope you are fine
My last holiday was in djijle. i travelled there with my sister to the farm of my grand parents
The farm was very big and beautiful . we felt at ease there,the pure air and a warm sun
-we helped our grand parents on the farm and at home because they couldn't do all
Businesses
we stayed there during two weeks ..
i liked that holiday and i hope to return there with my family

yours mano

.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

hi nesrine...
thank you for your last letter..i am very happy with this news
i hope to come with your sister lina....
i will visit many places with you in constantine like gantrate lhbal ..djbal alwahche ..islamic university and mosque amir abdlkader....
i 'm sure that you will like it espicially when we meet my friends Sonia and Marwa and you will take many photos with us
waiting for you
yours

Your pieces of writing are better now

Mind your mistakes

Always capitalize the personal pronoun I