The Queen Of My Heart

[sofmega]

there's times i walk and witness the truth within
throw darkness and isolation i held the night's first grin
to forget the thing we did and get back to our sin

but there was held backs i tried to fight
throw your love there was no beams of light
i tried to survive but it wasn't just right

sadly i say you were the queen of my heart
that idea sometimes kept me from falling apart
torturing me and dancing on my broken dreams the portrait of my black art

i don't worth living anymore it's a confession I'm ashamed to admit
drowning slowly in a vortex of fire that i lit
my love is out there for I'm not trying to make it fit

[Asolvip]

Great awesome

[Bluebird]

a little bit of hope brother.nice words.

[sofmega]

sorry bro but i get my inspiration throw pain

[Katy Pretty girl]

it's painful and realy sad
but it's also great and amazing
u'r words r so deep
and it's great to let it out
express u'r feelings through poems and songs

[رانيا3]

nice words i like it

[دعاء شيماء]

its very sad but
take me to other life
thannk you

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Good good good job you can do better brother need some more line okay need some extra lines reading your first lines it seems that you got a talent but it needs to be expanded
keep it up