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2014-04-15, 21:35 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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Accumulated Sins
Peace ppl "the midnight orchestra starts playing its sad tune
i bend my back ,walk and stare at the dazzling moon holding lots of secrets ,without a single answer why is the black night endless ?why is the moon getting larger? Yeah ,the moon is getting larger our heartless heart are getting darker to hell we are getting closer and from heaven we're getting further" i tried to look for answer thus i faced reality i looked back in the past i found a book called muslim's history we were so fine ,we made a great legend but when i reached our lifetime the page was bloodied we believe in perfection ,we forgot that life costs lots we're paying the price :"eternal sadness of all sorts " we wear lies ,we love stabbing each other ,we trust a lot in history we have been taught only how to say :"never mind it's destiny" because we are "BELIEVERS"unfortunately now we 're worshiping silence we keep watching our brothers dying ,our "OMA" collapsing in a whole silence and if our hearts shook just a lil we turn off the channel because we feel afraid of blood ,indeed we 've entered in a dark tunnel so far ;we are still the same "so knaves" selfishness ate huge parts of our souls it becomes a disease struggling with things that can't be changed Ignoring those that need to be changed chasing after life and money ,we became so materialistic we aim for the sky while we are beneath the ground ,c'mon be realistic we abandoned our identity in order to obey our BOSSES we forgot to learn life 's basics now we 're attending etiquette's classes history won't show us mercy any more it's too late to clear up our rusty dusty cores because dust was piling up all these years as well our sins silence won't help now we reached the brim "i'm still walking surrendering myself to the endless tune like a hopeless diver ,i'm drowning in the beauty of the round moon the moon that reflects our sins and guilts even the fake civilization we have built our sins are piling up so that the moon is getting larger indeed ,these accumulated sins made the moon seems bigger;;;;"
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2014-04-16, 11:44 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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seat is reserved i'll be back
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2014-04-16, 15:39 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | |||
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hi brother your seat is reserved even before postin the thread ,welcome take your time
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2014-04-16, 22:57 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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you're so right Intisar that's what's happening when we all forgot who we are. no one cares what about the others or how are the others doing? sometimes we be busy with our life problems not having time to look back only running forward our future without living for the moment.
I find this one very diffrent from the previous the fact that they were talking about you or one of the friends but this one is about us all in all if i am alrigh that's how I understood it Our Oma is being collapsed but it never fade away coz it'll be stronger again that's what destiny keeps saying but still we be suffering and maybe it's of the sins in us allah guides us through the right path . . I liked very much now you're talented I guarantee and you can do better and better keep it up and take care ^^ |
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2014-04-17, 17:43 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | ||||
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someone taught me that , i've been changed ^^ but on the other hand ,we keep running all the time as you said it's so hard to realize it in reality me talented ?i'm happy to hear that from you but i still have a long road to improve and i'll inshallah thank you brother i really mean it [ |
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2014-04-18, 22:48 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | ||||
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اقتباس:
yes you're talented u don't believe that emm okay only few people can write like what you write emm many teahcers of english Langu-age can't even write half of what you wrote trust me |
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2014-04-25, 22:50 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | ||||
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thanx for the encouragement bro it really helps in time like this |
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2014-04-26, 15:09 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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very high style of writing and expressing |
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2014-04-26, 19:27 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | ||||
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اقتباس:
I really really mean it just trust in yourself and keep it up eh I want to inform you that there is a contest in thje French section so please if you can enter read and interpret and vote for the best topic okaay for the best one Votez pour le meilleur sujet de la compétition |
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2014-04-26, 20:43 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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[QUOTE=oumhanni;1056224402]very high style of writing and expressing |
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2014-04-26, 20:46 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | ||||
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2014-04-27, 18:34 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | ||||
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اقتباس:
well thanks for your favour u r appreciated Intisar eh I want to ask u; White cloud is absent for months do you know anything or the reasons why she's absent? |
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2014-04-28, 08:53 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | ||||
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nah we are not in touch i hanv't talked to her for months ;hope she is fine and safe |
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2014-04-29, 11:04 | رقم المشاركة : 14 | ||||
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told me that he doesn't know too |
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